The Mentor
By A. Peter Swearengen
Copyright © 2001 Idyllist, Inc. 
All Rights Reserved

ACT I
ACT II
ACT III
             INT. KYLES OFFICE -- DAY

               Kyle pulls up the Nebulous Human Resources system, and uses 
               his password to access its records.  He searches for Doreen, 
               with alternative spellings, but nothing comes up. He digs a 
               tiny crumpled paper out of his wallet and keys in the number.  
               Nothing comes up. He looks at the paper again and changes 
               the number.

               COMPUTER: EMPLOYEE RECORD RESTRICTED

                                     KYLE
                         What the fuck?

               Kyle calls HAROLD THE ADMIN on his phone. Harold sounds like 
               he’s been inhaling Helium.

                                     HAROLD
                              (on phone)
                         Techsupport. Hey, Kyle. What’s up?

                                     KYLE
                         I just tried to look someone up on 
                         the HR system and got a "record 
                         restricted." What’s up with that?

                                     HAROLD
                         Restricted? Sure you didn’t just 
                         spell it wrong?

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                                                                        41.


                                     KYLE
                         I used an ID number.

                                     HAROLD
                         Hold on.

               Kyle rubs his chin, takes off his suit-jacket, pulls up his 
               sleeves, and turns 'Hacker.'

               Harold enters, a mid-30's, khaki-dressed, indespensible 
               cosmonaut, with boundless high-cholesterol energy and zero-
               tolerance for ignorant managers, and sidles up behind him.

                                     HAROLD (CONT'D)
                         Lose the tie, and I'd take you for 
                         one of the line-programmers. 

                                     KYLE
                         Who developed it?

                                     HAROLD
                         Haircut's too good, though.

               Kyle sets Harld straight with an annoyed glance 

                                     HAROLD (CONT'D)
                         To tell you the truth, I think they 
                         bought it off the shelf.

                                     KYLE
                         Shrinkwrap?

                                     HAROLD
                         It’s a mothball.

                                     KYLE
                         Can you get us in?

                                     HAROLD
                         I've got DBA access. But if the 
                         passwords are encrypted... 

                                     KYLE
                         Thanks.

               INT. CONFERENCE ROOM -- DAY

               Add Norma Lee here. Very competitive 

               HEADS of Nebulous companies sit around the long table 
               delivering reports on joint operations and intra-company 
               transactions. Stern sits at the front, studying a small 
               ceramic sphere in the palm of his hand, while JOHNSON, manager 
               of a materials design lab, explains its properties.

                                     JOHNSON
                         We see the thermal properties will 
                         be a breakthrough in a number of
                                     (MORE)

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                                     JOHNSON (CONT'D)
                         aerospace applications. Metals fatigue 
                         and crack over time. It’s light and 
                         plastic enough to form the wing of 
                         an airplane or an engine block.

                                     STERN
                         My friends, at the core of the 
                         Nebulous family, is invention. The 
                         pure creative moment. Yesterday, I 
                         was worth something like ten billion 
                         U.S. I would spend every penny if I 
                         knew that an invention like the 
                         computer or penicillin would come 
                         out of it. Let's face it. That's why 
                         we've got as much as we do. Cultivate 
                         that moment! Show me the creativity, 
                         and we will write the future together. 
                         Thank you, Johnson.

                                     JOHNSON
                         Thank you.

                                     STERN
                         Baxter, why haven’t we seen anything 
                         out of the alternative fuels research 
                         programs?

               Baxter loses his composure.

                                     BAXTER
                         Um. I’ve been asking the same question 
                         in my department meetings.  I think 
                         our ideas are good, we just need 
                         time to work on the development.

                                     STERN
                         Understood. Everyone, there is an 
                         unfortunate reality outside of the 
                         comfortable cocoon we all enjoy at 
                         Nebulous. It’s called profitability 
                         and shareholder satisfaction! What 
                         does that mean to you and me? Product!  
                         Ideas are a dime a dozen. Baxter, 
                         we’re going to find you a new 
                         appointment.

               A shocked silence stills the room. Is he fired?

                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         Black, you had something you wanted 
                         to present?

               Unnerved by the moment, Kyle has trouble starting.

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                                                                        43.


                                     KYLE
                         Oh, yes. The Ubiquisoft Enterprise 
                         team is announcing an inventory of 
                         all externally developed systems.

                                     STERN
                         Good. Keep it up. You've got Baxter's 
                         program.

               Kyle looks at Baxter who is simply staring at the table.

                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         I want all of you to watch this kid. 
                         He's tapped into something.

               Stern taps his head.

                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         If you don't all plan to be working 
                         for him within a year, you'd better 
                         learn how he does it.

               Kyle affords a painful scan of a room of skeptical faces.

                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         Okay? Black, explain the "inventory." 

                                     KYLE
                         We’re looking for possible 
                         opportunities to replace outdated 
                         systems with solutions which can be 
                         leveraged across multiple 
                         organizations.

                                     STERN
                         Okay. Don’t get carried away.

               INT. BAXTER'S OFFICE -- DAY

               The contents of his plush office now packed into boxes, Baxter 
               takes a moment to survey the world for the last time from 
               his upper floor vista. He tests the window, looking for a 
               way to open it.

               EXT. NEBULOUS HQ -- DAY

               Outside Baxter's office, nothing can be heard when he SLAMS 
               his chair against the window. The chair simply bounces.

               INT. BAXTER'S OFFICE -- DAY

               Baxter grabs his head in a FLASH OF BLINDING PAIN and falls 
               to his knees. Blood pours out of his nose. He collapses.

               Seconds later, HUGHES, ex-Secret Service Security Chief, 
               enters the room, observative and meticulous, notes Baxter as 
               though expecting what he sees, and carefully cleans the spot

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                                                                        44.


               of blood from his nose and the carpet. Hughes picks up the 
               phone and dials.

               INT. KYLES APARTMENT -- NIGHT

               Kyle works at a laptop connected by a long cable to the wall. 
               Dressed in T-shirt and shorts, he munches cold pizza. A video 
               image of Harold appears in the corner of his screen.

                                     HAROLD
                         This is going to take weeks, Kyle. I 
                         can’t even make sense of half of 
                         these outdated, piece of shit 
                         programs. Take this Inventory system 
                         the Auto Service Centers, for example.

                                     KYLE
                         We’re going to be selective.

                                     HAROLD
                         Okay. Like how?

                                     KYLE
                         I don’t know. Maybe start with 
                         accounting systems, employee 
                         databases.

                                     HAROLD
                         What are we looking for?

                                     KYLE
                         Whatever’s hidden.

                                     HAROLD
                         What do you mean by that?

                                     KYLE
                         I think Nebulous has some business 
                         it keeps quiet.

                                     HAROLD
                              (balks)
                         Probably a good reason for it.

                                     KYLE
                         We’ll keep our findings to ourselves.

                                     HAROLD
                         I don’t even want to find anything.

               Harold signs off. Kyle takes the scrap of paper which he has 
               carefully preserved and rereads Darleen’s number. The screen 
               reads: "New Employee Add."  He enters the number. It responds: 
               "Sorry. That number is already taken. Try again."

                                     KYLE
                         Well, then, where are you?

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                                                                        45.


               Kyle thinks for a moment and hits a couple keys, bringing 
               Harold’s face back.

                                     HAROLD
                         Yeah?

                                     KYLE
                         How do I access the employee database 
                         directly.

                                     HAROLD
                         That would require level four 
                         clearance.

                                     KYLE
                         I’m level four! It kicked me out.

                                     HAROLD
                         Well, I don’t know. Guess you gotta 
                         call HR.

                                     KYLE
                         Come on, Harold.

                                     HAROLD
                              (sighs)
                         Okay. I’m sending it to you. Don’t 
                         get me in trouble.

                                     KYLE
                         Thanks. Don’t worry.

               Harold signs off. Kyle reads the message, and enters the new 
               login, followed by the employee number.

               Doreen’s record appears. A picture shows her in a doctor’s 
               coat. The top of the record reads: "Classified. Mentor 
               Program. Ohai, California."

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         Mentor program? Hmmm. You’re not in 
                         Idaho.

               EXT. SANTA BARBARA AIRPORT -- DAY

               Kyle de-boards a small commercial airplane.

               EXT. INTERSTATE 101 -- DAY

               Kyle drives a rental sports car southbound.

               INT. KYLES CAR -- DAY

               Kyle uses his cell phone earpiece. A printout of Doreen’s 
               file is folded open on the passenger seat. Kyle takes the 
               Ohai exit.

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                                                                        46.


                                     KYLE
                         Eileen?  Tell Aaron I want to a 
                         complete inventory of all the systems 
                         we support in California. I know. 
                         Tell him to take a day. No. I’ll be 
                         back in the office tomorrow. Thanks.

               EXT. NONDESCRIPT OFFICE BUILDING, OHAI -- DAY

               A small sign at the parking lot reads: Nebulous Corporation.

               Kyle parks his car and enters the building.

               INT. OFFICE SECURITY DESK -- DAY

                                     FIRST GUARD
                         Can I help you?

               Kyle shows his company ID.

                                     KYLE
                         Yes, I’m from the Software division. 
                         Who’s the Director of this facility?

                                     FIRST GUARD
                         Just a moment. Did you have an 
                         appointment?

                                     KYLE
                         No, I didn’t have the opportunity.

               THE GUARDS’ POV-

               Kyle’s face and security information appear on the computer 
               screen. Kyle checks his watch.

                                     FIRST GUARD
                         I’m sorry sir. The Director is in a 
                         meeting until noon. You can wait in 
                         the reception area. That’s on level 
                         two.

                                     KYLE
                         That’s fine.

               The Second Guard hands Kyle a green security pass, with the 
               word: Visitor.

               Kyle walks through the lobby to the elevator.

               INT. WAITING ROOM -- DAY

               Kyle waits alone in the windowless room. He notices the large 
               print on the wall resembles a neuron or dendrite structure.  
               The stack of magazines includes Science, and The Journal of 
               Neurobiology.

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                                                                        47.


                                     DOREEN (O.S.)
                         How can I help you?

               Kyle turns and is only a little less shocked than she is.

                                     DOREEN (CONT'D)
                         Oh. I'm sorry...

                                     KYLE
                              (shakes her hand)
                         Kyle. I thought you were in Idaho,...

                                     DOREEN
                         Doreen Whiteacre. Ah, no. I was just 
                         recently promoted to facility director 
                         here.

                                     KYLE
                         Congratulations. I'm sure the 
                         weather's an improvement.

                                     DOREEN
                         Yes. The town is a bit small. What 
                         brings you here.

                                     KYLE
                         Well, the Ubiquisoft Group is 
                         conducting an inventory of systems 
                         throughout the whole corporation.

                                     DOREEN
                         I see. And as director, you're 
                         conducting this inventory yourself. 
                         Ought to take you, what, about three 
                         years?

                                     KYLE
                         You gave me a number.

                                     DOREEN
                         This isn't an accidental encounter, 
                         is it?

                                     KYLE
                         Did you think I would let it go? 
                         Your number is a member an entire 
                         subsidiary operation.  Completely 
                         "Top Secret." Nobody I've talked to 
                         in Nebulous knows anything about it.

                                     DOREEN
                         So, you had to find out.

                                     KYLE
                         Is it government? Some kind of 
                         biological warfare lab?

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                                     DOREEN
                         Did you try asking your boss?

                                     KYLE
                         No.

                                     DOREEN
                         Interesting. Why not? Since he's the 
                         CEO, he should know.

                                     KYLE
                         Sometimes there are things we're not 
                         supposed to know.

                                     DOREEN
                         So, that doesn't apply to you?

                                     KYLE
                         That's not why I came.

                                     DOREEN
                         I shouldn't have given you that 
                         number.

                                     KYLE
                         Why did you?

                                     DOREEN
                         Maybe just to get you off my back.

                                     KYLE
                         You could have just told me to get 
                         lost.

                                     DOREEN
                         I wish I had.

                                     KYLE
                         It's going to be okay.

               Doreen tightens.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         Does that mean anything to you.

                                     DOREEN
                         Well, unfortunately, I have a meeting 
                         in five minutes. I need to prepare...

                                     KYLE
                         I think there's something you can 
                         explain.

               Doreen shakes Kyle's hand again and heads for the door. She 
               presses her palm against a hidden scanner and the door 
               unlocks. She stops, takes a card out of her pocket and holds 
               it out.

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                                     DOREEN
                         Well, I can help you with your 
                         inventory. Here's my card. Next week, 
                         I should have some time.

               Kyle watches the door close. Discouraged, he looks at the 
               card.

               EXT. SANTA BARBARA AIRPORT RUNWAY -- AFTERNOON

               Carrying a briefcase, Kyle crosses the runway to a private 
               jet. CARMEN, a broadshouldered, diplomatic, exexutive 
               assistiant, greets him at the gangway.

                                     CARMEN
                         Afternoon, sir. Everything in order?

                                     KYLE
                         Yes, thank you. What time should we 
                         expect to make New York?

                                     CARMEN
                         Pilot estimates ten-thirty, Eastern.

               Kyle studies Carmen for a moment.

                                     KYLE
                         You look like someone I can trust.

               Carmen gives him a quizzical look. Kyle hands him his 
               briefcase.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         Take this and put on my desk in my 
                         office. Make sure it's there by six 
                         o'clock tomorrow morning.

                                     CARMEN
                         Okay. And yourself?

                                     KYLE
                         I'm flying back with you. I'll take 
                         a taxi from the airport. Understand?

                                     CARMEN
                         Certainly, sir. Anything else?

                                     KYLE
                         Thank you.

                                     CARMEN
                         With pleasure.

               Kyle turns and walks briskly back to the terminal gate. 
               Without blinking, Carmen enters the plane, the gangway is 
               rolled back and the door closed.

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                                                                        50.


               INT. KYLES CAR -- AFTERNOON

               Driving South on Interstate 101, Kyle calls Harold's cell 
               phone.

                                     HAROLD
                              (on phone)
                         This is Harold.

                                     KYLE
                         Haven't left work yet, have you?

               There's a rough noise at the other end which turns into 
               Harold's laughter.

                                     HAROLD
                         Sure, boss. Since you weren't around, 
                         I left at four-thirty.

                                     KYLE
                         Very funny.

                                     HAROLD
                         Sometimes I wonder about you, Black.

                                     KYLE
                         Okay. Now pay attention.

                                     HAROLD
                         You know, Stern was poking around 
                         here a little while ago, looking for 
                         you.

                                     KYLE
                         What'd you tell him?

                                     HAROLD
                         Oh, I said you were on a rampage, 
                         torturing all the project managers 
                         in the building about deadlines.

                                     KYLE
                         Swell. Any idea how long he's in 
                         town?

                                     HAROLD
                         Said he was on his way out. I'm sure 
                         he left a message with Eileen.

                                     KYLE
                         Okay. Now, I need two things from 
                         you. First, if I don't show up 
                         tomorrow morning by seven-thirty, I 
                         want you to log me into the system 
                         there, so it looks like I'm in. 

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                                                                        51.


                                     HAROLD
                         Just a second. Black?

                                     KYLE
                         If you're not comfortable...

                                     HAROLD
                         I have to apologize.

                                     KYLE
                         Don't worry...

                                     HAROLD
                         No. When you started, I took you for 
                         much more of a tight-ass than you 
                         are.

                                     KYLE
                         Well, don't tell anyone. Remember 
                         that HR system we looked at the other 
                         day?

                                     HAROLD
                         Sure. I found the server it's on. I 
                         think we could run the logins through 
                         some decryption analysis.

                                     KYLE
                         I want you to add a record.

                                     HAROLD
                         Okay.

               INT. OFFICE SECURITY DESK -- EVENING

               Two night-shift guards, MOUSEY and IRRITABLE, snap to 
               attention when Kyle approaches the desk.

                                     IRRITABLE
                         Can we help you? 

               Kyle puts his hand on the scanner.

               need a new scan 

                                     KYLE
                         On an inspection tour, gentlemen.

               Mousey reaches for the phone.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         Don't touch that phone!

               Both guards react.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         You'll find the clearance on the 
                         system.
                                     (MORE)

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                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         My name is Winchester, from Corporate. 
                         I'm part of an advance security-
                         inspection team. If you attempt to 
                         warn anyone in the building, including 
                         your fellow security officers, I 
                         will have to abort the inspection, 
                         which, I assure you, will make my 
                         boss extremely angry .

               Mousey sets back the phone. Irritable runs the hand-scanner, 
               which clears Kyle. He hands Kyle a temporary badge.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         Thank you. How many personnel are 
                         currently in the building?

               Irritable glances at his screen.

                                     IRRITABLE
                         Sixty-eight, sir.

                                     KYLE
                              (surprised)
                         Is that typical?

                                     IRRITABLE
                         Give or take a couple, yes sir.

                                     KYLE
                         Give me a listing of their names and 
                         departments, and a map.

               Mousey runs the printout and hands it to Kyle. Kyle inspects 
               it.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         Why they grey areas?

                                     MOUSEY
                         Classified areas, sir.

                                     KYLE
                         Okay. Thank you, gentlemen. Your 
                         assitance will be noted in my report.

               Authoritative, Kyle heads through the security gate.

               Mousey silently mouths the words "ass-hole" to his fellow.

               INT. LABORATORY CORRIDOR -- NIGHT

               Kyle walks swiftly while simultaneously scanning the employee 
               listing. He stops at a door marked "Whiteacre -- Director," 
               knocks and waits. He glances down the corridor and sees two 
               white-coat TECHNICIANS pass between doors. When the coast is 
               clear, he puts his hand on the scanner. The door unlocks.

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                                                                        53.


               INT. DOREEN'S OFFICE -- NIGHT

               Kyle circles the immaculate room. Not a single loose paper  
               on the desk, table, or wastebasket, he can find nothing. The 
               filing cabinet is locked.  Only a box of freshly-minted 
               business cards on the shelf. On his way out, he stops, sees 
               an ornate music-box, and opens the lid. The theme of "Ode to 
               Joy" plays. A chill runs down Kyle's spine. He snaps it shut, 
               looks around the room, which now seems vaguely foreboding, 
               and walks out.

               INT. ELEVATOR -- NIGHT

               Kyle selects a level.

                                     ELEVATOR
                         Authorization.

               He presses his hand against the scanner and the Elevator 
               moves.

               INT. EXERCISE ROOM -- NIGHT

               A row of a dozen treadmills occupy an otherwise nondescript 
               chamber. At the far end, An ATTENDANT stands with a PATIENT, 
               mid-20's, who walks, mechanically, gaze fixed on the blank, 
               white wall.

               Kyle leaves the elevator and walks toward them. He notices a 
               sign:

               "SILENCE IS STRICTLY OBSERVED AT ALL TIMES"

               The Attendent acknowledges Kyle, briefly, and returns to her 
               observation of the Patient, who show no awareness of his 
               presence.

               The elevator opens. A SECOND ATTENDENT, holding the hand of 
               a dazed YOUNG PATIENT, guides her to a treadmill. Neither 
               take any notice of the mystified Kyle.

               INT. LABORATORY CORRIDOR -- NIGHT

               Walking, Kyle notes he has no signal on his cell phone. He 
               stops at another door marked, "Observation 1221". The security 
               scanner allows him to enter.

               INT. OBSERVATION ROOM -- NIGHT

               A one-way mirror looks into a Lab with what resembles a 
               dentist's chair with an old-style hairdresser's dryer 
               attached. Several computer displays hum below the glass. 
               Kyle takes note opens the door to leave, just as two 
               businesslike, aproned, TECHNICIANS enter the Lab.

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               INT. LAB -- NIGHT

               The Technicians efficiently prepare the room, turning on 
               computers, and whiping down the chair and headset. Jen, 
               sleeping, enters on wheelchair, pushed by a BORED ATTENDANT.  
               With great effort and the help of the Technicians, they lift 
               Jen onto the chair, strap down her limbs, and position the 
               headset. Nobody says a word.

               INT. OBSERVATION ROOM -- NIGHT

               Fascinated, Kyle sits in a comfortable chair. The computer 
               screens come on. The Attendant nods to the Technicians and 
               leaves. The Technicians begin work at computer terminals. A 
               3-D image of the Jen's brain appears on a monitor. Kyle 
               observes as areas of the frontal and medulla light up. Jen 
               twitches, as though dreaming.

               Curious, Kyle starts exploring the computers in front of 
               him. On one screen appear the words, "Sequence Abort (Y/N)."

               Kyle hits the "Y".

               Jen screams and strains at his bonds. The Attendants rush to 
               her and remove the headset. She has become fully awake and 
               is terrified.

                                     FIRST ATTENDANT
                         We had a sequence abort!

                                     SECOND ATTENDANT
                         Thorazine.

               They look toward the observation glass.

                                     SECOND ATTENDANT (CONT'D)
                         Who's in there?

               Kyle, realizes he's done something bad, stands, and quickly 
               leaves the room.

               INT. LABORATORY CORRIDOR -- NIGHT

               Kyle lets himself through another door, just as a SECURITY 
               TEAM, with IRRITABLE in the lead, rounds the corner at the 
               end of the hall.

               INT. STABILIZATION ROOM -- NIGHT

               Kyle walks slowly between a long row of beds, half of which 
               are occupied by SLEEPING PATIENTS, all healthy-appearing, 
               mid-20's and younger. Next to each bed is a small computer 
               interface. The room is dimly lit. Everything is white, down 
               to the patient's garb.

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               Kyle steps close to the bed of Clarence. He kneels down to 
               observe a thin wire running from his temple to the head of 
               the bed. Clarence clutches a violin to his chest.

               He looks up and sees Doreen enter with TWO WHITECOAT 
               TECHNICIANS. They walk to a SLEEPING YOUNG WOMAN. Kyle hits 
               the deck.

               Doreen works at the computer. Immediately the young woman 
               begins to groan and speak unintelligibly. The Technicians 
               restrain her sluggish movement. Doreen leans over closely.

                                     DOREEN
                         Good morning, Isabelle. Let's go for 
                         a walk.

               The Technicians lift the Vacant and expressionless Young 
               Woman to her feet and they all slowly walk out. The lights 
               dim again.

               INT. OFFICE SECURITY DESK -- NIGHT

               With a breifcase and coat, Doreen exits the elevator and 
               heads for the door. She notices the Irritable Guard yawning.

                                     DOREEN
                         Get enough sleep last night, Weaver?

                                     IRRITABLE
                         Huh? Good night, Ms. Whiteacre.

                                     DOREEN
                         Good night.

               She walks out and another elevator opens and disgorges Kyle. 
               He walks quickly for the exit.

                                     KYLE
                         See you tomorrow, gentlemen.

               Both Guards eye him, suspiciously.

               EXT. DOWNTOWN SANTA BARBARA ROAD -- NIGHT

               Doreen drives a dilapidated Volkswagen to the loading door 
               of an unmarked warehouse. She gets out and unlocks the door 
               and dives her car in. Kyle drives by, makes a quick turn, 
               and rolls back, in view, with his lights off. He watches her 
               close the door.

               Lights go on upstairs. Kyle hesitates, then leaves his car 
               and goes to locate the door. Circling the building, he stops 
               at a little-used door.

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               EXT. DOREEN'S WAREHOUSE -- NIGHT

               Kyle looks for a doorbell. The door opens, suddenly. He 
               stumbles back.

               Doreen, transformed from a button-down corporate manager to 
               black tights, and a black Ministry t-shirt with THIEVES in 
               bold letters across the back, holds a drink in a glass. She 
               hands it to Kyle.

                                     DOREEN
                         You're just in time for a nightcap.

               She holds the door for him.

               INT. DOREEN'S WAREHOUSE -- NIGHT

               Doreen and Kyle enter her living room. The decor is a jumbled 
               mixture of scientifica, neurological diagrams, and photographs 
               of cats.

               Befuddled, Kyle follows her through the large room. 

                                     DOREEN
                         So, Mr. Software Director, are 
                         security breaches and sabotage part 
                         of your job description?

                                     KYLE
                         I have responsibility for all software 
                         systems employed at Nebulous.  To be 
                         honest, for all its sophistication, 
                         the security system you've got here 
                         wouldn't stop a spy or a smart kid 
                         with a laptop.

                                     DOREEN
                         So, which are you?

               Kyle nods, acknowledging the touche. He studies a cat-photo. 
               She keeps a comfortable distance.

                                     DOREEN (CONT'D)
                         Venus. She was good.

                                     KYLE
                         You like cats.

                                     DOREEN
                         Are you pretending I don't know you 
                         were skulking around my lab for the 
                         last four hours? 

                                     KYLE
                         What is it? Sleep studies? Mental 
                         patients?

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                                     DOREEN
                         You could really get us both into a 
                         lot of trouble. What if Stern finds 
                         out? Maybe I like my job.

                                     KYLE
                         What's PR-spin? Quietly testing some 
                         new psychiatric drug?

               He moves closer to her. She stiffens.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         Maybe we can talk to him together.

                                     DOREEN
                         This is good. I like relentless. 

               Kyle kisses her. She enjoys it, but turns away casually when 
               it's over. 

                                     KYLE
                         Give me the scoop. What were you 
                         doing at that conference in China?

               She considers. 

                                     DOREEN
                         The conference never happened.

                                     KYLE
                         What do you mean?

                                     DOREEN
                         Those people aren't sick.

               Truth dawns. Kyle sits.

                                     KYLE
                         They're recruits. 

                                     DOREEN
                         This is the Nebulous Management 
                         Training program.  We have another 
                         facility in Idaho and one in the 
                         South Pacific. You're a top graduate, 
                         Kyle.

               Kyle swallows, dismayed by where this is going.

                                     KYLE
                         What did you do? How long was I-?

                                     DOREEN
                         Six months.

                                     KYLE
                         Why can't I remember?

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                                     DOREEN
                         Think back to the recruit-party at 
                         Stern's. You drank too much. You 
                         can't remember how you got back home, 
                         either.

               INT. STERN'S HOME -- NIGHT

               The Mentor Program Recuits mill around the mansion, happily, 
               drinking, ready to embark on their new lives.

               LATER:

               Kyle has trouble focusing his eyes. A WOMAN speaks to him 
               about her home in Alabama. He can't take his eyes off her 
               cleavage. Out of the corner of his eye, he sees someone fall 
               over.

               LATER:

               Everywhere in the house, the Recruits have fallen, collapsed, 
               or sagged into semi-coma. Doors open and suddenly the house 
               is crawling with MEDICAL TECHNICIANS.  The Recruits are 
               maneuvered onto stretchers and carried away. Stern remains, 
               alone, sitting with a drink.

                                     DOREEN (V.O.)
                         You didn't return home. Nobody did. 
                         You were drugged and transported to 
                         the Center. It's not an easy 
                         operation.

               INT. STABILIZATION ROOM -- DAY

               Kyle, dressed in a patient's pajamas, sleeps along with the 
               other recruits. The Technicians carefully check and adjust 
               each Recruit and position portable electronic devices over 
               their heads. 

                                     DOREEN (V.O.)
                         When the drugs wore off, you were 
                         already attached to a Mentor 
                         interface. The electrical delta-
                         stimulus kept you in a passive, 
                         receptive state. You were fed through 
                         a tube, walked on a treadmill, and 
                         slept for sixteen hours everyday, 
                         between sessions. When you woke up, 
                         you were home.

               INT. DEN, DOREEN'S WAREHOUSE -- NIGHT

               The alcohol and revelations enhance Kyle's confusion.  

                                     DOREEN
                         You've had a long day.

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                                                                        59.


               She pours him another drink while he broods. 

                                     KYLE
                         What a mind fuck.

                                     DOREEN
                         Think of it as plastic surgery for 
                         the mind. Yes, your personality has 
                         changed, but only along a natural 
                         inclination.  Some conflicted traits 
                         have subsided, insubordination, 
                         motivation problems. Now, you're 
                         just hungry to learn. You like power.

                                     KYLE
                         Have you-?

                                     DOREEN
                         No. My neural structures are 
                         incompatible. Believe me, I would do 
                         it in an instant if I could.

               Kyle downs his glass.

                                     KYLE
                         Stern manufactures himself a loyal, 
                         hyperproductive workforce.

                                     DOREEN
                         Soon, this discovery will belong to 
                         everyone. We just have to develop it 
                         a little further. 

               Doreen seduces by evading 

               Kyle stands up and moves close to her again. Still the 
               scientist, she restrains her own desire.

                                     KYLE
                         My father died while I was in there.

                                     DOREEN
                         It was difficult for us. We had to 
                         set the speech in a remote location, 
                         to justify your delayed response.

               She sets up a demonstration... 

                                     KYLE
                         Show it to me.

               She leads him to a workroom with several computers, electronic 
               components, and tools. She points to A Mentor System rig, 
               identical to those in the Laboratory Stabilization room.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         I want a demonstration. What's the 
                         shortest program you've got?

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                                                                        60.


                                     DOREEN
                         Five minutes. It wouldn't be 
                         difficult.

               INT. DOREEN'S WORKROOM -- NIGHT

               Kyle lies on a futon, the Mentor equipment positioned at his 
               head. Doreen prepares the program. She connects a single 
               wire with a patch to Kyle's temple, and turns on the system.

                                     DOREEN
                         The neuro-harmonics are more effective 
                         if you can allow your mind to drift, 
                         like when you fall asleep. Let 
                         thoughts come and go on their own. 
                         You know, like a meditation. In a 
                         few moments, you'll enter a lucid-
                         dream state. Then, I'll start the 
                         program.

                                     KYLE
                         What will it be?

                                     DOREEN
                         Nothing specific.  It's called a 
                         receptive-recursive cycle. It tends 
                         to enhance your thought process, 
                         briefly. What Freud called magical 
                         thinking. Make whatever you want 
                         into reality. Everyone who's tried 
                         it says it's good.

                                     KYLE
                         Alright, I'm sold.

                                     DOREEN
                         Breathe.

               Kyle closes his eyes for a few moments. He tries to relax. 
               She curses under her breath. He sneaks a peek at her.

                                     KYLE
                         Something wrong?

                                     DOREEN
                         Just be patient. It's not starting.

                                     KYLE
                         When I was under before-

                                     DOREEN
                         Training-

                                     KYLE
                         Training. Was there ever a problem?

               Troubled, she stops her work and looks at him.

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                                                                        61.


                                     DOREEN
                         The facility is only a couple years 
                         old. We've had a few bugs. There was 
                         a network-glitch. It caused a 
                         fluctuation in half of the training 
                         connectors. Some of the patients 
                         immediately went into status seizures.  
                         Others had no problem at all. A few, 
                         like you, woke up.

               She looks at his face and strokes his head.

                                     DOREEN (CONT'D)
                         Every subject, without exception, 
                         who has woken up from the program, 
                         has suffered from major psychological 
                         disruptions...

                                     KYLE
                         Disruptions.

                                     DOREEN
                         Acute paranoia, delusions, 
                         schizophrenia.

                                     KYLE
                         So what happened?

                                     DOREEN
                         You went back to sleep.

               Doreen's POV? 

                                     DOREEN (CONT'D)
                         We shot you with enough thorazine to 
                         drop a horse. You were still wide 
                         awake. I tried to comfort you.

               He pulls her down to him.

                                     KYLE
                         I think I need more comforting.

               Losing interest in the demonstration, they succomb to their 
               desires. Kyle helps her out of her clothes. They take the 
               bed by storm, consuming one another ravenously.

               INT. DOREEN'S WORKROOM -- MORNING

               Kyle wakes, still clothed, and removes the wire from his 
               temple. Doreen crosses the room, getting dressed for work.

                                     KYLE
                         What-?

                                     DOREEN
                         Morning. I assume you're flying back 
                         to New York today.

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                                                                        62.


               He stretches and sits up, groggily.

                                     KYLE
                         The demonstration.

                                     DOREEN
                         What do you recall?

                                     KYLE
                         We made love.

               Amused, she brushes her hair.

                                     DOREEN
                         Really? I'm flattered.

                                     KYLE
                         It was very real.

                                     DOREEN
                         Of course. You might as well consider 
                         it real.

               Kyle stands and walks behind her, puts his arms around, and 
               fondles her breasts. She blushes, but doesn't try to stop 
               him.

                                     KYLE
                         It's not quite satisfying to think 
                         it didn't happen.

               She sets down the brush and turns to complete the embrace. 

                                     DOREEN
                         I'm sorry.

                                     KYLE
                         I'm sorry for both of us. 

                                     DOREEN
                         Maybe we should do something about 
                         it.

               Shaking with excitement, she puts her hands into his pants 
               and eases them down his legs. He guides her, backward, to 
               the bed where they descend with even more intense passion.

               INT. DOREEN'S WORKROOM -- NIGHT

               Kyle opens his eyes and looks at Doreen sleeping next to 
               him, naked.

                                     R.J. (O.S.)
                         The brain's approach to problem 
                         solving, is to develop a coherent 
                         'experience' which can be played
                                     (MORE)

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                                                                        63.


                                     R.J. (O.S.) (CONT'D)
                         over and over, successively, in the 
                         unconscious. A kind of obsessive 
                         learning process, wouldn't you agree?

               Kyle sits up and discovers Dr. Bitterroot relaxing in a 
               cushioned chair, with a whisky, neat.

                                     R.J. (CONT'D)
                         Hello, Kyle. What do you think of my 
                         invention?

                                     KYLE
                         I can't decide-

                                     R.J.
                         If it's good or evil.

                                     KYLE
                         No. What I am now.

                                     R.J.
                         Ah. A better question: An individual 
                         or a product, and what's the 
                         difference?

                                     KYLE
                         Who are you?

                                     R.J.
                              (shrugs)
                         I suppose the answer is, whoever you 
                         want me to be.

               Kyle gets up and dresses. He glances down at Doreen, still 
               sleeping. He walks and looks out the window at the ocean.

                                     KYLE
                         She's not real.

                                     R.J.
                         Not the "real" Ms. Whitecomb, as you 
                         want to say. But, curiously enough, 
                         I think she's just as either of you 
                         want her to be.

                                     KYLE
                              (irritated)
                         What if I change my mind?

                                     R.J.
                         Another good question: what if we 
                         change it for you.

               Kyle looks back to the bed. Lechner, fully clothed and bored, 
               sips his own whisky.

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                                                                        64.


                                     LECHNER
                         Solve the problem yourself, Kyle. 
                         You hold the answer.

                                     ANOTHER LECHNER (O.S.)
                         Or better yet-

               Kyle turns to see Lechner seated in Bitterroot's place.

                                     ANOTHER LECHNER (CONT'D)
                         You are the answer. What is the 
                         question?

                                     KYLE
                              (exasperated)
                         Okay. I've had enough.

               INT. DOREEN'S WORKROOM -- NIGHT

               Kyle sits up and rips the wire off his head. Doreen gets up 
               from the chair.

                                     DOREEN
                         Careful. Try to move slowly for 
                         awhile.

                                     KYLE
                         I didn't like that.

               She reaches him and daubs the small spot of blood forming at 
               his temple with an antiseptic wipe.

                                     DOREEN
                         I'm sorry, it can be a bit 
                         frustrating. That's why it's limited 
                         to 5 minutes.

                                     KYLE
                         You're not kidding. I need another 
                         drink.

               She heads for the kitchen. 

                                     DOREEN
                         Let me start some coffee. It's almost 
                         daylight.

               Kyle turns to the window. The faint glow of early dawn 
               illustrates the sky over the ocean. 

               INT. UBIQUISOFT CONFERENCE ROOM -- DAY

               Kyle leads a meeting with his ENGINEERING TEAM. More 
               professional than ever, he reveals little evidence of an 
               internal struggle which rages.

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                                                                        65.


                                     KYLE (V.O.)
                         What could I do?  I went back to 
                         work. Pretended nothing had changed. 
                         When someone tells you that thing 
                         you were so sure happened was just a 
                         dream, does that make it any less 
                         real?  If anything, it became more 
                         real to me. Was it denial or 
                         commitment?  If this was my destiny, 
                         then I put myself even more to the 
                         task of perfection. I would become 
                         that man Stern had groomed me to be. 
                         And more.

               INT. NEBULOUS CORPORATE HQ -- DAY

               Kyle opens his mouth to speak to a RECEPTIONIST, just as his 
               cellphone rings. They exchange an understanding smile and he 
               answers.

                                     KYLE
                         Yes?

                                     DOREEN
                              (on phone)
                         I need to conduct a follow-up 
                         examination.

                                     KYLE
                              (hushed)
                         I thought you said we couldn't see 
                         each other for awhile.

                                     DOREEN
                         It's been three weeks.

                                     KYLE
                         Okay.

                                     DOREEN
                         I'm coming out there, this time.

                                     KYLE
                         Okay. Uh. Listen, I'm about to go 
                         into a meeting with Stern.

                                     DOREEN
                         Don't keep him waiting. I'll be there 
                         Monday. I'm staying in the Stanhope.

               Kyle hangs up and turns to face the smiling Receptionist who 
               probably heard everything. She points toward the Board Room. 

               INT. NEBULOUS BOARD ROOM -- DAY

               The meeting not yet in-progress, SENIOR MANAGERS AND DIRECTORS 
               filter in and take their seats.

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                                                                        66.


               while Kyle nervously takes a seat near the back. Stern, 
               conversing with a FRENCH DIRECTOR, a savvy mid-60's patrician, 
               notices Kyle and gestures him to a seat at his right.

                                     STERN
                              (in French)
                         Pierre, this is our manager from the 
                         software group, Kyle Black.

                                     FRENCH DIRECTOR
                              (in French)
                         Ah, yes. The young man from 
                         Ubiquisoft. I believe he has a 
                         reputation already. 

                                     KYLE
                              (in French)
                         A good one, I hope.

               The Director and Stern are startled and pleased by Kyle's 
               fluency.

                                     FRENCH DIRECTOR
                              (in French)
                         Nothing that can't be repaired through 
                         tenacity.

               They shake hands. Stern calls the meeting to order.

                                     STERN
                         Good afternoon everyone. Let's get 
                         down to business.

               The room quiets. Notebooks and PDA's come out. Stern takes a 
               silent inventory.

                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         Glad everyone could make it. We'll 
                         be quick.  First, as you all know, 
                         regardless of how multinational 
                         Nebulous has become, we are still 
                         not immune to localized fluctuations 
                         and trade-disputes. Appropriately, 
                         some of our significant investors...

               He nods slightly at each Director, in turn:

                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         Goldman Sachs, Microsoft, Vanguard... 
                         Have expressed concern that we should 
                         expect diminishing results from some 
                         of our manufacturing and 
                         telecommunications operations and 
                         assets over the next year.
                                     (MORE)

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                                                                        67.


                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         As a result, I am preparing to 
                         introduce an across-the-board cost-
                         cutting program which will trim a 
                         billion dollars from our budget.

               The Directors applaud, politely. The rest respond with 
               muttered concerns. Kyle doesn't know which to do.

                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         We will review the program in two 
                         weeks, on the eighth of April, here 
                         in this room. Thank you. Questions?

               Unprepared, most just sit, mutely.

                                     SEASONED MANAGER
                         If you don't mind, is it perhaps 
                         possible that we could hear a bit of 
                         strategy for these cost reductions?

                                     STERN
                         You've been through this before, 
                         Ike.

                                     IKE
                         Sure, but if we cut so much out of 
                         our budgets, how are we going to 
                         avoid killing the innovation we 
                         consider so important.

                                     STERN
                         I think you're confusing innovation 
                         with opulence.

                                     IKE
                         I'd hardly call some of our research 
                         programs opulent.

               Dissent rises in the room. Kyle clears his throat.

                                     KYLE
                         Mr. Stern?

                                     STERN
                         You have a comment to make, Mr. Black?

                                     KYLE
                              (nervous)
                         Ah.  I would recommend we focus on 
                         the known synergies between various 
                         Nebulous assets and seek to enhance 
                         those, while trimming non-critical 
                         areas.

               With reservations, most agree.

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                                                                        68.


                                     STERN
                         Well put. Now let's move on. If any 
                         of you has a recommendation, please 
                         submit them to me via email. 

               The managers acknowledge, tensely.

               INT. HALLWAY, NEBULOUS CORPORATE HQ -- DAY

               In his effortless manner, Stern heads for the elevator. Kyle 
               rushes to catch up with him. Stern notices.

                                     STERN
                         How is Ubiquisoft, Kyle? I'm hearing 
                         good things.

                                     KYLE
                         Busy. We've got a deadline practically 
                         every week now. Can we-?

                                     STERN
                         You gave a good answer in there. The 
                         Board will remember that.

               They enter an elevator together. Stern hits his own button, 
               then, Kyle's.

                                     KYLE
                         Thank you. Can I talk to you about-? 

                                     STERN
                         We should discuss expanding your 
                         responsibilities. There are many 
                         programs which could benefit from 
                         fresh oversight.

               Kyle hits the Emergency Stop button. The elevator stops. 

                                     KYLE
                         The Mentor Program.

               Kyle's approach amuses Stern.

                                     STERN
                         I admire your determiniation, Kyle. 
                         The Mentor Program has an excellent 
                         management team at the moment.

                                     KYLE
                         Why is it classified?

                                     STERN
                         Good reasons. Privacy among them.

                                     KYLE
                         I'd like to get involved.

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                                                                        69.


               Stern turns the elevator back on. 

                                     STERN
                         I'll take it into consideration.  
                         The current Director, Doreen 
                         Whiteacre, will be here next week.  
                         I'll ask her to give you a call.

               The elevator door opens. Kyle steps out.

                                     KYLE
                         Thank you, sir.

               Stern holds the door. 

                                     STERN
                         I've said this before. You're still 
                         young here. Don't get carried away. 

               He lets the door close.

               EXT. STANHOPE HOTEL -- DAY

               A cab drops Kyle in front of the hotel. The DOORMAN holds 
               the door for him.

               INT. LOBBY, STANHOPE -- DAY

               Kyle scans the lobby. A few TOURISTS schlepp bags and glance, 
               indifferently. He spots DOREEN, dressed in a new outfit and 
               tinted glasses. She smiles, slightly, when she sees him.

               stronger 

                                     KYLE
                         Every time I see you, I like you 
                         more.

                                     DOREEN
                         Maybe I shouldn't have called.

                                     KYLE
                         I was going to call you.

                                     DOREEN
                         I need food.

               She puts her arm through his. They stroll casually for the 
               door. 

                                     KYLE
                         Let me take you to this place I know.

                                     DOREEN
                         Is it far?

                                     KYLE
                         Short cab ride.

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                                                                        70.


               The Doorman holds the door. They stop. 

                                     DOREEN
                         Maybe we can find something closer.

               INT. DREAM ROOM -- DAY

               Naked, Kyle studies an illuminated model of a brain in his 
               hands. Electricity flashes inside.

               INT. DOREEN'S ROOM, STANHOPE -- DAY

               Kyle lies on the bed in a room devoid of color. 

               INT. DOREEN'S ROOM, STANHOPE -- DAY

               The lock turns and Kyle and Doreen burst in, already half-
               undressed. Immersed in one-another, they feel their way to 
               the table. Kyle hoists her onto the table. She touches the 
               Room Service menu.

                                     DOREEN
                         What would you like me to order?

                                     KYLE
                         Anything you want.

               She pushes the menu off the table and leans backward, pulling 
               him with her by his collar. It's no longer food they're hungry 
               for.

               INT. DOREEN'S ROOM, STANHOPE -- DAY

                                     DOREEN
                         Room service tray and plates covered 
                         with partially eaten salads and 
                         fishcakes, clothes strewn over the 
                         furniture, Kyle "comes-to" as he's 
                         making love to Doreen on the tousseled 
                         bed. They climax together and bask 
                         in the afterglow.  My compliments on 
                         the choice of cuisine.

                                     KYLE
                         Sometimes location is everything.

               Doreen gets up and goes into the bathroom. Kyle notices her 
               large purse by the bed and looks inside.  He sifts through 
               the usual vanity supplies.

                                     DOREEN
                         How are you feeling these days, Kyle?

                                     KYLE
                         Good.

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                                                                        71.


               Kyle finds an electronic connector with a long, thin wire. 
               He quickly puts it back. 

                                     DOREEN
                         Not obsessing about the Mentor 
                         Program?

                                     KYLE
                         No. Why?

               Doreen returns and gets back into bed. She spies a drop of 
               blood formed at Kyle's left temple and rubs it off with her 
               thumb. He sees the smear of blood on her thumb. 

                                     DOREEN
                         I wanted to ask. Strawberry.

               Doreen gives Kyle a strawberry, which he eats. 

                                     KYLE
                         I recently discovered that I have a 
                         pretty good command of French. I 
                         never even studied it in school.

                                     DOREEN
                         It's what we term "collateral 
                         adjustment."  Each of the training 
                         programs are built specifically from 
                         one or more real person's neural 
                         patterns, called an "accretion."  We 
                         enhance them significantly to create 
                         a series of progressive experiences. 
                         The French is a trace of that original 
                         accretion.

                                     KYLE
                         So, whose neural patterns was my 
                         program built on?

                                     DOREEN
                         Stern's. And Dr. Bitterroot.

                                     KYLE
                         What does Nebulous do with the people 
                         who don't make it though the Mentor 
                         Program?

               This question hits an uncomfortable cord.

                                     DOREEN
                         I thought you said you weren't 
                         obsessing.

               Kyle turns her their focus to earlier pleasures.

                                     KYLE
                         I'm not.

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                                                                        72.


               Kyle's cell-phone rings. He and Doreen share a look of 
               annoyance. Kyle checks the caller ID, sighs, and answers:

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         Yes?

                                     HUGHES
                              (on phone)
                         Mr. Black?

                                     KYLE
                         Who is this?

                                     HUGHES
                         Braxton Hughes, Director of Security 
                         for Nebulous Corporation. I like to 
                         meet with you. The sooner, the better.

                                     KYLE
                         Mind if I ask what it's regarding?

                                     HUGHES
                         I'm investigating a security-breach 
                         that occurred recently at on of our 
                         research facilities. I'll explain it 
                         further when we meet.

                                     KYLE
                         Okay. Fine. I'll be there.

                                     HUGHES
                         Thank you. Oh, and sir, I'd like to 
                         ask you not to mention this to anyone.

                                     KYLE
                         No problem. Bye.

               He hangs up and stares at Doreen. She comprehends.

                                     DOREEN
                         You have to go.

               Elevator problem. Kyle winds up back on Doreen's floor. Sees 
               technicians packing up equipment. 

               INT. HOTEL ELEVATOR -- DAY

               Kyle realizes he's forgotten his jacket. He rides back to 
               Doreen's floor. The door opens. She's waiting with his coat. 
               He takes it. The door closes:

                                     KYLE
                         Call you later...

               Kyle realizes the elevator is going up.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         Fuck!

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                                                                        73.


               TWO OLD COUPLES board the elevator and it heads down. Again 
               the door's open on Doreen's floor. Everyone waits, annoyed.

               As the doors close, THREE WHITECOAT TECHNICIANS wheel heavy 
               travel-cases out of Doreen's room. Kyle jams his hand between 
               the doors, but continues to watch.

                                     RASPY OLD LADY
                         You gettin' off here, young man?

               Kyle shakes his head and lets the doors close. One technician 
               glances his way as they shut. 

               INT. CONFERENCE ROOM, NEBULOUS HQ -- DAY

               Kyle and Hughes study each other like chess opponents.

                                     HUGHES
                         You've been very successful here, 
                         Black.

                                     KYLE
                         Thank you.

                                     HUGHES
                         I don't trust a man who rises quickly. 
                         It usually means he's doing 
                         something... unseemly.

                                     KYLE
                         Funny. I don't trust "Security 
                         Officers" who project conspiracy on 
                         everyone they meet.

                                     HUGHES
                         Let's not waste time. You recall 
                         meeting the former director of Energy 
                         Research?

                                     KYLE
                         The guy who quit?

                                     HUGHES
                         Was fired.

                                     KYLE
                         Oh. Guess you can't trust the 
                         grapevine.

                                     HUGHES
                         Vernon Baxter. Did you ever have 
                         opportunity to speak to this man in 
                         person?

                                     KYLE
                         Well, let's see... he stopped by my 
                         office right after I came on.

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                                                                        74.


                                     HUGHES
                         What did he say?

                                     KYLE
                         Um. Nice office. Something about 
                         flies.

                                     HUGHES
                         Flies?

                                     KYLE
                         Buzzing.

                                     HUGHES
                         Flies buzzing. Anything else?

                                     KYLE
                         That's it. 

                                     HUGHES
                         Three weeks ago, you flew to Santa 
                         Barbara and visited a Biotechnology 
                         research facility in Ohai.

                                     KYLE
                         Has it been that long?

                                     HUGHES
                         What was your business there?

                                     KYLE
                         Well, as director of software for 
                         the entire Nebulous Corporation, as 
                         well as its subsidiaries, I have 
                         been conducting an inventory of 
                         systems currently deployed...

                                     HUGHES
                         And this "inventory" includes hacking 
                         the security database, modifying 
                         records, and entering the facility 
                         under an assumed credential?

                                     KYLE
                         I was me. As I mentioned to the 
                         Director, Miss... uh.

               He waits for Hughes to fill in the name, but he doesn't.

                                     KYLE (CONT'D)
                         It was nothing more than a simple 
                         test of system integrity. I think 
                         both of us would be held responsible 
                         if a breach occurred.

               Hughes drops a stack of digital photos on the table of Kyle 
               skulking around the laboratory.

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                                                                        75.


                                     HUGHES
                         An that test included these 
                         activities?

                                     KYLE
                         I had a look around.

               Hughes smoulders and grows a bit larger.

                                     HUGHES
                         I'm watching you very closely, Black.  
                         And here's why: Someone is stealing 
                         technology, secrets, whatever you 
                         want to call it, from our 
                         "biotechnology" labs. There's evidence 
                         of what you would call an auction. I 
                         have a good idea who it is. Make 
                         sure you have nothing connecting you 
                         with this. When I clean up, I clean 
                         up everything.

               Hughes gives Kyle a look that would boil a gallon of water.

               INT. KYLE'S C.C.L. OFFICE -- DAY

               Kyle logs into a personnel system and looks up Vernon Baxter. 
               The "Termination Date" is 4/19/09. A note indicates Baxter's 
               wife, Clara, is receiving death benefits.

               He accesses a New York City Coroner database and cross-
               references the name. Baxter is listed as having died of a 
               "Cerebral Hemmorage resulting from high blood pressure."

               Kyle pulls a printout of Doreen's security file out of his 
               locked desk drawer.  He picks up the phone.

                                     KYLE
                         Whiteacre's office, please. Yes. 
                         This is- accounting.

               INT. DOREEN'S OFFICE -- DAY

               She answers her phone.

                                     DOREEN
                         Whiteacre. Hello? Hello?

               She hangs up and wonders.

               INT. KYLE'S C.C.L. OFFICE -- DAY

               Kyle hangs up. He folds the printout and pockets it.

               Kyle wonders if Quincy could know him.

               Kyle learns the history of Bitterroot's program. One of his 
               brilliant grad students hooked himself up and fried his brain. 
               Bitterroot was quietly asked to leave. Stern purchased the  
               Rorschach Inst. and set up the program there. A newspaper 
               article makes it look like Bitterroot "retires."

               INT. HALLWAY, M.I.T -- DAY

               Kyle slowly walks the hallway he's walked hundreds of times. 
               He chooses a doorway with the nameplate removed and knocks.

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                                                                        76.


                                     VOICE (O.S.)
                         Come in.

               Kyle opens the door to an office jammed wall-to-wall with 
               journals, books, and other scientific writings. A large, 
               rolltop desk collects dust. Opposite, sits Kyle's friend 
               Quincy, slightly aged.  Quincy's annoyance turns to muted 
               surprise.

                                     QUINCY
                         Ah. Hello? Can I help you?

                                     KYLE
                         Quincy! What are you doing here?

                                     QUINCY
                         Do we know each other?

                                     KYLE
                         Do we?

                                     QUINCY
                         Not that I can say. 

                                     KYLE
                         Mind if I ask what you do here?

                                     QUINCY
                         Well, non-specifically, I'm a 
                         professor of Psychology.

                                     KYLE
                         You're Quincy Farnes. Gooche's Hollar, 
                         Kentucky. Undergrad Shuffleboard 
                         Champion of Cambridge.

                                     QUINCY
                         You read about this somewhere?

                                     KYLE
                         What happened to the Cognative Science 
                         department?

                                     QUINCY
                         Long gone.

                                     KYLE
                         Gone?

                                     QUINCY
                         Yup. Shut down. Are you a journalist? 
                         I really must get back to work.

               Unfazed, Kyle hands him his card with a handwritten number.

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                                     KYLE
                         No. I'm interested in the work of 
                         Dr. Bitterroot. Here's my number at 
                         the Hyatt, if you find you have time 
                         to talk.

               Quincy accepts the card, politely. Kyle leaves.

               EXT. HALLWAY, M.I.T -- DAY

               Kyle inspects the door where the neameplate used to be. He 
               leans closer to catch the sound of Quincy's voice.

                                     QUINCY (O.S.)
                         No. He was just here. Today. Yes. 
                         I'm not sure. This is our oppurtunity. 
                         Can you get your people together? 
                         Immediately.

               The phone slams down. Kyle makes a quick move around the 
               corner, as Quincy opens his door and looks around. 

               INT. BAR, CAMBRIDGE -- DAY

               Two beers down, Quincy opens up to Kyle.

                                     QUINCY
                         You kinda freaked me out with that 
                         "I know you" stuff, today. 

                                     KYLE
                         I think Stern stole the technology 
                         from Dr. Bitterroot and developed 
                         it.

                                     QUINCY
                         No. Stern owns Bitterroot.

                                     KYLE
                         He's using the system on people.

                                     QUINCY
                         Nah. It's not developed enough yet.

                                     KYLE
                         I've been on it.

                                     QUINCY
                         What do you remember?

                                     KYLE
                         I don't know.

                                     QUINCY
                         What do you mean, you don't know?

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                                                                        78.


                                     KYLE
                         I can't tell the difference between 
                         a real memory and a program.

                                     QUINCY
                         If it worked, that's what would 
                         happen.

                                     KYLE
                         It works.

                                     QUINCY
                         No it doesn't. Low-grade patterning 
                         lasts about 36 hours.  Real learning 
                         requires high-energy forced-resonance.  
                         Bitterroot used one of his research 
                         team as a test-subject.  The forced-
                         resonance stimulus of the medulla 
                         set off a chain-reaction which whiped 
                         out his memory, thought, 
                         consciousness, everything.  If you 
                         want to see the results, he's in the 
                         Rorshach Institute in North Albany.

               Crestfallen, Kyle gropes for possibilities.

                                     KYLE
                         But it works. I've seen it.

                                     QUINCY
                              (shrugs)
                         I don't think so. I've spent the 
                         last three years proving it.

                                     KYLE
                         But-

                                     QUINCY
                         Listen, you need help. Maybe you had 
                         an accident or something. 

                                     KYLE
                         No accident.

                                     QUINCY
                              (shakes his head)
                         I wish I could help you, man.

                                     KYLE
                         Do you know someone named- Whiteacre.

               Kyle shakes off a wave of dizziness. 

                                     QUINCY
                         Never heard of her.

               He looks at Kyle, who is having trouble focusing his eyes.

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                                                                        79.


                                     QUINCY (CONT'D)
                         You feel okay?

                                     KYLE
                         Yeah. It's just a-

               Kyle collapses. Quincy moves quickly to catch him. He walks 
               Kyle out of the bar, waving-off a few DISTRACTED PATRONS.

                                     QUINCY
                         Just missed a couple night's sleep 
                         is all.

               INT. WINDOWLESS OFFICE CUBICLE -- DAY

               Kyle wakes up, face down on the keyboard of his computer, 
               and looks around.

               INT. WELDING ROOM -- DAY

               Art stops the welder and climbs up onto the work area to 
               make adjustments. He sees Kyle without looking down.

                                     ART
                         Hey, kid. How's the new job?

                                     KYLE
                         Um. Not what I expected.

                                     ART
                              (laughs)
                         Shit. You're sittin' at a desk all 
                         day. Talk about goddamn useless 
                         employment.

                                     KYLE
                         No, I mean something's wrong. I'm 
                         like falling asleep and having these 
                         wierd dreams. I dreamt you were dead.

               Art disconnects a fat cable from the welder arm and lowers 
               it to Kyle.

                                     ART
                         Here. Don't touch that connector 
                         unless you want the 20,000 volt 
                         handshake. Set it on the ground. 
                         That's it. I don't think a desk job 
                         suits you.  Why don't you try and 
                         spend some time out here on the floor? 
                         We can take a look at the operations 
                         and work on your report.

                                     KYLE
                         I'd like that.

               Kyle studies the high-voltage cable.

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               INT. KYLE'S HOTEL ROOM -- NIGHT

               Kyle wakes with a gasp as Quincy disconnects a Mentor Probe 
               from his temple. He blinks at a room filled with CHINESE 
               INDUSTRIALISTS, gravely observing him, and conversing quietly 
               to each other.

                                     QUINCY
                         Relax, Kyle. I apologize for treating 
                         you like this. But it's really outside 
                         of my control.

                                     YOUNG INDUSTRIALIST
                         We want a demonstration with one of 
                         our own workers.

                                     QUINCY
                         Of course. You've got to understand 
                         the amount of preparation however. 
                         We would require a down payment and 
                         three months to establish an 
                         operational center in your territory.

               An OLD BUSINESSMAN shakes his head and says something which 
               his ASSISTANT translates:

                                     ASSISTANT
                              (to Kyle)
                         You feel any side effects?

               Kyle sits up, slowly and looks at the Mentor System next to 
               his bed, then at Quincy.

                                     KYLE
                         Who are these people?

                                     QUINCY
                         Investors, Kyle. I'll explain in a 
                         few minutes.
                              (turns)
                         Gentlemen, I'll have to ask you to 
                         leave now. You may submit your bids 
                         by nine o'clock this evening, using 
                         the established channel.

               He holds the door and nods at each, in turn. With room 
               cleared, Quincy pours Kyle a glass of water.

                                     QUINCY (CONT'D)
                         I'm sorry about that.  Those people 
                         are interested in the Mentor 
                         technology. We can make a lot of 
                         money.

                                     KYLE
                              (confused)
                         Make a lot of?- what are you selling?

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                                                                        81.


               Quincy taps Kyle's head. 

                                     QUINCY
                         This is a commodity, Kyle. You're 
                         the worker of the future. You were 
                         almost right. Stern did steal the 
                         technology. I worked on it for three 
                         years, like a slave. Now I'm going 
                         to get something back.

               Two knocks on the door.

                                     VOICE (O.S.)
                         Room Service!

               Quincy goes to the peephole.

                                     QUINCY
                         We didn't order room service!

               With a gentle POP! and a few splinters, Quincy staggers 
               backward, blood running from his empty eye socket, and 
               collapses. A key rattles in the door and in walks Hughes, 
               wearing a room service uniform, and surgical gloves, as he 
               pockets a small pistol and silencer. He drags Quincy out of 
               the way of the door. Doreen enters and checks Kyle's eye 
               with a penlight.

                                     DOREEN
                         Did he connect you?

               Kyle pushes her out of his way and heads for the door.

                                     KYLE
                         Get me the fuck out of here.

                                     DOREEN
                         Kyle, I want to help you.

               Without turning, Kyle exits. Hughes moves to pursue him, but 
               Doreen stops him.

                                     DOREEN (CONT'D)
                         Let him go. 

               RORSACH INSTITUTE, NEW YORK -- DAY

               Kyle drives a rental car to the shaded, multi-building, 
               Victorian-era mansion.  The quiet, almost romantic grounds 
               would better suit an elderly-care home, than a facility for 
               the seriously deranged.  Kyle clips a new badge on his jacket 
               on his way up the steps.

               INT. INSTITUTE RECEPTION AREA -- DAY

               A few DOCTORS and RESEARCHERS come and go, while Kyle waits 
               for the Receptionist to finish a phone call.

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                                                                        82.


               She glances at his badge.

                                     RECEPTIONIST
                         Good afternoon, Dr. Black. How can I 
                         help you?

                                     KYLE
                         I've just transferred to this facility 
                         and I'm supposed to get a tour with 
                         a Dr. Bitterroot.

               He smiles. She's charmed.

                                     RECEPTIONIST
                         Hmmm. Who would that be? What's your 
                         field?

                                     KYLE
                         Neuro-Cybernetics.

                                     RECEPTIONIST
                         Wow! That sounds cool. I guess that 
                         would be neurology, right?

                                     KYLE
                         Close enough for me.

                                     RECEPTIONIST
                         Just a second.

               She dials.

                                     RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D)
                              (cheery)
                         Hello? It's Shaila. How's it going?   
                         There's a Dr. Black here for a tour 
                         with the director. Oh? I see. Oh, 
                         that would be great.

               She beams hangs up.

                                     RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D)
                         I'm sorry. Dr. Bitterroot isn't in 
                         right now. But, Dr. Richards is on 
                         his way down.

                                     KYLE
                         Thank you. I think I'll like this 
                         place.

                                     RECEPTIONIST
                         Oh, sure you will. Dr, Bitterroot is 
                         a genius. So do you know your way 
                         around Albany?

                                     KYLE
                         Never been here before.

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                                                                        83.


                                     RECEPTIONIST
                         Well, at 7 o'clock a few of us get 
                         together and head out for a drink.  
                         If you'd like to join us. Might be a 
                         good way to get the lay of the land.

                                     KYLE
                         Sounds great. I'll make it my goal.

               Dr. Richards, a mid-40's black man, used to juggling women 
               and a number of serious responsibilities.

                                     RICHARDS
                         Hi, Shaila. Hello, you must be Dr. 
                         Black.

                                     KYLE
                         That's me.

               They shake.

                                     RICHARDS
                         Well, I apologize.  Dr. Bitterroot 
                         didn't mention he was expecting 
                         anyone.

                                     KYLE
                         Well, if it's not a good time.

                                     RICHARDS
                         We've constantly got new people coming 
                         through here. We're not very good at 
                         the welcoming business.

                                     KYLE
                         Shaila's done a great job.

               She likes that comment. Dr. Richards indicates his gratitude.

                                     RICHARDS
                         Thanks, Shaila. Don't know where 
                         we'd be without you.

                                     RECEPTIONIST
                         Just appreciate what you've got, 
                         honey.

               INT. INSTITUTE HALLWAY -- DAY

               Kyle and Dr. Richards walk together, avoiding busy STAFFERS, 
               as they go.

                                     RICHARDS
                         So, where are you from?

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                                                                        84.


                                     KYLE
                         Nebulous Corporation. I'm the Software 
                         Director.

                                     RICHARDS
                         Interesting. What brings you here?

                                     KYLE
                         Oh, I'm just performing a general 
                         survey of systems and resources.

                                     RICHARDS
                         So, you work with Dr. Whiteacre?

                                     KYLE
                         Only superficially.

                                     RICHARDS
                         I see. Well, then. Shall we see the 
                         grounds?

                                     KYLE
                         Certainly.

               EXT. GARDENS, RORSCHACH INSTITUTE -- DAY

               A dozen or so PATIENTS with various intractable nervous 
               conditions wander the groomed landscape. Dr. Richards leads 
               Kyle down the ramp from the Institute into the garden.

                                     RICHARDS
                         Dr. Bitterroot has brought hope to 
                         these people and their families. Mr. 
                         Lawrence, for instance.

               Dr. Richards leads them to a mid-20's patient, LAWRENCE, 
               working at an abstract, colorful, oil painting.

                                     RICHARDS (CONT'D)
                         Mr. Lawrence! How are we today?

                                     LAWRENCE
                         D-D-Done making a- picture for daddy.

                                     RICHARDS
                         How wonderful! Daddy will be so 
                         pleased!

               Lawrence blushes and then forgets the conversation.

                                     RICHARDS (CONT'D)
                              (to Kyle)
                         Lawrence's frontal lobes were 
                         irrepairably damaged when he smacked 
                         into a wall doing 40 on his 
                         motorcycle.
                                     (MORE)

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                                                                        85.


                                     RICHARDS (CONT'D)
                         Dr. Bitterroot has helped his brain 
                         replace the lost functions by forming 
                         new neural pathways. He's turned out 
                         to be a very talented painter.

               They stoll down to the pond where Clarence expertly plays a 
               complex violin piece for Jen and Rudy. When he finishes, all 
               applaud.

                                     RICHARDS (CONT'D)
                         Very good, Clarence!  
                              (leads Kyle away)
                         Clarence was autistic who had 
                         demonstrated some savant capabilities. 
                         In less than 3 months, Dr. Bitterroot 
                         had him playing baroque quartets.

               They walk to the patio to sit near TWO CHESSPLAYERS. Kyle 
               glances at a Wheelchair-bound, PATIENT, who awkwardly stares 
               back, head lolling. The Patient makes a moaning sound and 
               knocks a lidded cup onto the grass. Kyle picks it up and 
               hands it back. The Patient knocks it out of Kyle's hand.

                                     RICHARDS (CONT'D)
                         Freddy! Be polite.

               Dr. Richards takes the cup and snaps it into a holder on the 
               wheelchair. He looks back toward the pond and sees Dr. 
               Bitterroot, surrounded by his adoring patients.

                                     RICHARDS (CONT'D)
                         I'm sorry. Oh, Dr. Bitterroot has 
                         returned.

               They walk down to meet Dr. Bitterroot. Lawrence runs ahead 
               of them.

                                     LAWRENCE
                         Daddy!

               Dr. Bitterroot gently hugs his patients one at a time. He 
               turns and sees Kyle and Richards.

                                     R.J.
                         Good afternoon, Dr. Richards. Ah, 
                         Dr. Black, I'd heard you might be 
                         paying us a visit.

                                     RICHARDS
                         You know each other?

                                     R.J.
                         Professionally. Would you be able to 
                         joing me for a drink in my office, 
                         Dr. Black?

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                                                                        86.


                                     KYLE
                         Ah. I might do without the drink. It 
                         hasn't been treating me well, lately.

                                     R.J.
                         Of course!

               INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE, INSTITUTE -- DAY

               Kyle and Dr. Bitterroot observe through a one-way mirror. 
               Alone, Freddy, sleeps, connected to the Mentor System.

                                     R.J.
                         I understand your frustration, Dr. 
                         Black. But I have to say, that I'm 
                         not sure you appreciate what you 
                         have. 

                                     KYLE
                         It's difficult if you don't know 
                         what it is.

                                     R.J.
                         I think you're making it difficult 
                         for yourself. There are many people 
                         looking out for you.

                                     KYLE
                         Is it me they care about, or their 
                         investment?

                                     R.J.
                         We shouldn't test our friends.

                                     KYLE
                         If we know who they are.

                                     R.J.
                         You see this man here? I would give 
                         up all of this-
                              (gestures)
                         to have his mind back. 

                                     KYLE
                         Noble.

                                     R.J.
                         He was my friend.

                                     KYLE
                         I see. Well, I'm going to ask you, 
                         did Stern steal the Mentor System 
                         from you?

                                     R.J.
                         No.

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                                                                        87.


                                     KYLE
                         Do you know what they put in my head?

                                     R.J.
                         Yes. I suggested it to them.

                                     KYLE
                         What is it?

                                     R.J.
                         If there were anyone you could ask, 
                         it would be him.

                                     KYLE
                         Who?

               Dr. Bitterroot indicates Freddy. 

               INT. VAULT, INSTITUTE -- DAY

               Dr, Bitterroot show's Kyle a large vault, lined floor to 
               ceiling, with racks of optical disks.

                                     R.J.
                         I think you've already discovered 
                         that the Mentor System functions on 
                         the principle of the plasticity of 
                         experience. This is our library of 
                         experiences which we use to create 
                         the programs.

               Kyle studies the name tags on the racks.

               Kyle steals a disk labelled "Stern" 

               INT. KYLE'S C.C.L. OFFICE -- DAY

               Unable to concentrate, Kyle stares out of his window. He 
               opens a drawer and takes out the folded painting by Dr. 
               Bitterroot.

                                     KYLE (V.O.)
                         Without a mind, all we see is chaos.  
                         Our sense immersed in a flood with 
                         no order. There are no friends, no 
                         humanity. Just noise.

               EXT. WEST VILLAGE PIER -- EVENING

               Kyle tells Lechner about the Mentor System. Lechner says 
               that they must take it to the world. He will arrange a meeting 
               with a reporter from the Wall Street Journal. 

               A few ASIAN FISHERMEN chat idly, watching their lines. Alone, 
               unchanged, Lechner walks out to the end of the wooden pier 
               where Kyle waits.

                                     LECHNER
                         How's it goin, Kyle?

                                     KYLE
                         You miss Dad often?

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                                                                        88.


                                     LECHNER
                         Sure. No one seems to be able to 
                         shell out the abuse like he could. 
                         By comparison, my editor's a pussy.

               INT. KYLE'S APARTMENT -- NIGHT

               Kyle works to unlock the secret Dr. Bitterroot was witholding 
               from him. 

               INT. DOREEN'S OFFICE -- DAY

               Kyle demands Doreen explain what happened with Quincy. She 
               tells Kyle that Hughes considers him a security risk. 

               INT. COGNATIVE COMPUTING LAB -- DAY

               Kyle sits with his feet up on the desk, snoozing. A loud 
               knock jolts him awake.

                                     KYLE
                         Come in!

               Stern and Huges enter, ready to deal, with zero patience.

                                     STERN
                         How did I know you'd be here?

                                     KYLE
                         Good question.

                                     STERN
                         Forget it. What have you got for me?

                                     KYLE
                         What do you mean?

                                     STERN
                         Kyle! Wake up! You are an employee 
                         of Nebulous Corporation.  I own 
                         everything you do, think, or make. I 
                         own your shit! Don't hold out on me!

                                     KYLE
                         I'm not-

               Hughes puts Kyle in a hammerlock.

                                     STERN
                         You've been witholding this discovery 
                         on Neural Resonance. I know it.

               Eyes buldging, Kyle doesn't reply.

                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         I've come to take what belongs to 
                         me.

               He speed-dials his cell phone and says something equally 
               rapid. Gasping, Kyle watches Stern pace back and forth in 
               the cramped laboratory. A moment later, Doreen, wearing her 
               casual, black attire, enters. She goes directly to a computer 
               and begins work copying software.

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                                                                        89.


               Kyle gags her name. She ignores him.

                                     STERN (CONT'D)
                         You don't seem to understand the 
                         nature of our contract, Kyle. There 
                         is no such thing as private research 
                         or academics.  Everything is funded 
                         by, made for, and to the benefit of 
                         Nebulous. And only we have the power 
                         to terminate that contract.

               Stern gestures to Hughes. They wrestle Kyle down on the desk, 
               scattering papers and tiny components. Stern takes a 
               rudamentary Mentor Connector and attaches it to Kyle's temple. 
               Panicked, Kyle struggles, and almost breaks free, except 
               Stern lays him out with a bonejarring punch. They restrain 
               his arms. Dizzy, he understands when he hears:

                                     DOREEN
                         What are you going to do?

               They release Kyle. He almost manages to remove the Mentor 
               Connector, before... ZAP!!!

               The universe goes white.

 

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