
The Mentor
By A. Peter Swearengen
Copyright © 2001 Idyllist, Inc.
All Rights Reserved
ACT I
ACT II
ACT III
INT. KYLES OFFICE -- DAY
Kyle pulls up the Nebulous Human Resources system, and uses
his password to access its records. He searches for Doreen,
with alternative spellings, but nothing comes up. He digs a
tiny crumpled paper out of his wallet and keys in the number.
Nothing comes up. He looks at the paper again and changes
the number.
COMPUTER: EMPLOYEE RECORD RESTRICTED
KYLE
What the fuck?
Kyle calls HAROLD THE ADMIN on his phone. Harold sounds like
he’s been inhaling Helium.
HAROLD
(on phone)
Techsupport. Hey, Kyle. What’s up?
KYLE
I just tried to look someone up on
the HR system and got a "record
restricted." What’s up with that?
HAROLD
Restricted? Sure you didn’t just
spell it wrong?
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41.
KYLE
I used an ID number.
HAROLD
Hold on.
Kyle rubs his chin, takes off his suit-jacket, pulls up his
sleeves, and turns 'Hacker.'
Harold enters, a mid-30's, khaki-dressed, indespensible
cosmonaut, with boundless high-cholesterol energy and zero-
tolerance for ignorant managers, and sidles up behind him.
HAROLD (CONT'D)
Lose the tie, and I'd take you for
one of the line-programmers.
KYLE
Who developed it?
HAROLD
Haircut's too good, though.
Kyle sets Harld straight with an annoyed glance
HAROLD (CONT'D)
To tell you the truth, I think they
bought it off the shelf.
KYLE
Shrinkwrap?
HAROLD
It’s a mothball.
KYLE
Can you get us in?
HAROLD
I've got DBA access. But if the
passwords are encrypted...
KYLE
Thanks.
INT. CONFERENCE ROOM -- DAY
Add Norma Lee here. Very competitive
HEADS of Nebulous companies sit around the long table
delivering reports on joint operations and intra-company
transactions. Stern sits at the front, studying a small
ceramic sphere in the palm of his hand, while JOHNSON, manager
of a materials design lab, explains its properties.
JOHNSON
We see the thermal properties will
be a breakthrough in a number of
(MORE)
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JOHNSON (CONT'D)
aerospace applications. Metals fatigue
and crack over time. It’s light and
plastic enough to form the wing of
an airplane or an engine block.
STERN
My friends, at the core of the
Nebulous family, is invention. The
pure creative moment. Yesterday, I
was worth something like ten billion
U.S. I would spend every penny if I
knew that an invention like the
computer or penicillin would come
out of it. Let's face it. That's why
we've got as much as we do. Cultivate
that moment! Show me the creativity,
and we will write the future together.
Thank you, Johnson.
JOHNSON
Thank you.
STERN
Baxter, why haven’t we seen anything
out of the alternative fuels research
programs?
Baxter loses his composure.
BAXTER
Um. I’ve been asking the same question
in my department meetings. I think
our ideas are good, we just need
time to work on the development.
STERN
Understood. Everyone, there is an
unfortunate reality outside of the
comfortable cocoon we all enjoy at
Nebulous. It’s called profitability
and shareholder satisfaction! What
does that mean to you and me? Product!
Ideas are a dime a dozen. Baxter,
we’re going to find you a new
appointment.
A shocked silence stills the room. Is he fired?
STERN (CONT'D)
Black, you had something you wanted
to present?
Unnerved by the moment, Kyle has trouble starting.
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43.
KYLE
Oh, yes. The Ubiquisoft Enterprise
team is announcing an inventory of
all externally developed systems.
STERN
Good. Keep it up. You've got Baxter's
program.
Kyle looks at Baxter who is simply staring at the table.
STERN (CONT'D)
I want all of you to watch this kid.
He's tapped into something.
Stern taps his head.
STERN (CONT'D)
If you don't all plan to be working
for him within a year, you'd better
learn how he does it.
Kyle affords a painful scan of a room of skeptical faces.
STERN (CONT'D)
Okay? Black, explain the "inventory."
KYLE
We’re looking for possible
opportunities to replace outdated
systems with solutions which can be
leveraged across multiple
organizations.
STERN
Okay. Don’t get carried away.
INT. BAXTER'S OFFICE -- DAY
The contents of his plush office now packed into boxes, Baxter
takes a moment to survey the world for the last time from
his upper floor vista. He tests the window, looking for a
way to open it.
EXT. NEBULOUS HQ -- DAY
Outside Baxter's office, nothing can be heard when he SLAMS
his chair against the window. The chair simply bounces.
INT. BAXTER'S OFFICE -- DAY
Baxter grabs his head in a FLASH OF BLINDING PAIN and falls
to his knees. Blood pours out of his nose. He collapses.
Seconds later, HUGHES, ex-Secret Service Security Chief,
enters the room, observative and meticulous, notes Baxter as
though expecting what he sees, and carefully cleans the spot
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44.
of blood from his nose and the carpet. Hughes picks up the
phone and dials.
INT. KYLES APARTMENT -- NIGHT
Kyle works at a laptop connected by a long cable to the wall.
Dressed in T-shirt and shorts, he munches cold pizza. A video
image of Harold appears in the corner of his screen.
HAROLD
This is going to take weeks, Kyle. I
can’t even make sense of half of
these outdated, piece of shit
programs. Take this Inventory system
the Auto Service Centers, for example.
KYLE
We’re going to be selective.
HAROLD
Okay. Like how?
KYLE
I don’t know. Maybe start with
accounting systems, employee
databases.
HAROLD
What are we looking for?
KYLE
Whatever’s hidden.
HAROLD
What do you mean by that?
KYLE
I think Nebulous has some business
it keeps quiet.
HAROLD
(balks)
Probably a good reason for it.
KYLE
We’ll keep our findings to ourselves.
HAROLD
I don’t even want to find anything.
Harold signs off. Kyle takes the scrap of paper which he has
carefully preserved and rereads Darleen’s number. The screen
reads: "New Employee Add." He enters the number. It responds:
"Sorry. That number is already taken. Try again."
KYLE
Well, then, where are you?
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45.
Kyle thinks for a moment and hits a couple keys, bringing
Harold’s face back.
HAROLD
Yeah?
KYLE
How do I access the employee database
directly.
HAROLD
That would require level four
clearance.
KYLE
I’m level four! It kicked me out.
HAROLD
Well, I don’t know. Guess you gotta
call HR.
KYLE
Come on, Harold.
HAROLD
(sighs)
Okay. I’m sending it to you. Don’t
get me in trouble.
KYLE
Thanks. Don’t worry.
Harold signs off. Kyle reads the message, and enters the new
login, followed by the employee number.
Doreen’s record appears. A picture shows her in a doctor’s
coat. The top of the record reads: "Classified. Mentor
Program. Ohai, California."
KYLE (CONT'D)
Mentor program? Hmmm. You’re not in
Idaho.
EXT. SANTA BARBARA AIRPORT -- DAY
Kyle de-boards a small commercial airplane.
EXT. INTERSTATE 101 -- DAY
Kyle drives a rental sports car southbound.
INT. KYLES CAR -- DAY
Kyle uses his cell phone earpiece. A printout of Doreen’s
file is folded open on the passenger seat. Kyle takes the
Ohai exit.
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46.
KYLE
Eileen? Tell Aaron I want to a
complete inventory of all the systems
we support in California. I know.
Tell him to take a day. No. I’ll be
back in the office tomorrow. Thanks.
EXT. NONDESCRIPT OFFICE BUILDING, OHAI -- DAY
A small sign at the parking lot reads: Nebulous Corporation.
Kyle parks his car and enters the building.
INT. OFFICE SECURITY DESK -- DAY
FIRST GUARD
Can I help you?
Kyle shows his company ID.
KYLE
Yes, I’m from the Software division.
Who’s the Director of this facility?
FIRST GUARD
Just a moment. Did you have an
appointment?
KYLE
No, I didn’t have the opportunity.
THE GUARDS’ POV-
Kyle’s face and security information appear on the computer
screen. Kyle checks his watch.
FIRST GUARD
I’m sorry sir. The Director is in a
meeting until noon. You can wait in
the reception area. That’s on level
two.
KYLE
That’s fine.
The Second Guard hands Kyle a green security pass, with the
word: Visitor.
Kyle walks through the lobby to the elevator.
INT. WAITING ROOM -- DAY
Kyle waits alone in the windowless room. He notices the large
print on the wall resembles a neuron or dendrite structure.
The stack of magazines includes Science, and The Journal of
Neurobiology.
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DOREEN (O.S.)
How can I help you?
Kyle turns and is only a little less shocked than she is.
DOREEN (CONT'D)
Oh. I'm sorry...
KYLE
(shakes her hand)
Kyle. I thought you were in Idaho,...
DOREEN
Doreen Whiteacre. Ah, no. I was just
recently promoted to facility director
here.
KYLE
Congratulations. I'm sure the
weather's an improvement.
DOREEN
Yes. The town is a bit small. What
brings you here.
KYLE
Well, the Ubiquisoft Group is
conducting an inventory of systems
throughout the whole corporation.
DOREEN
I see. And as director, you're
conducting this inventory yourself.
Ought to take you, what, about three
years?
KYLE
You gave me a number.
DOREEN
This isn't an accidental encounter,
is it?
KYLE
Did you think I would let it go?
Your number is a member an entire
subsidiary operation. Completely
"Top Secret." Nobody I've talked to
in Nebulous knows anything about it.
DOREEN
So, you had to find out.
KYLE
Is it government? Some kind of
biological warfare lab?
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48.
DOREEN
Did you try asking your boss?
KYLE
No.
DOREEN
Interesting. Why not? Since he's the
CEO, he should know.
KYLE
Sometimes there are things we're not
supposed to know.
DOREEN
So, that doesn't apply to you?
KYLE
That's not why I came.
DOREEN
I shouldn't have given you that
number.
KYLE
Why did you?
DOREEN
Maybe just to get you off my back.
KYLE
You could have just told me to get
lost.
DOREEN
I wish I had.
KYLE
It's going to be okay.
Doreen tightens.
KYLE (CONT'D)
Does that mean anything to you.
DOREEN
Well, unfortunately, I have a meeting
in five minutes. I need to prepare...
KYLE
I think there's something you can
explain.
Doreen shakes Kyle's hand again and heads for the door. She
presses her palm against a hidden scanner and the door
unlocks. She stops, takes a card out of her pocket and holds
it out.
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49.
DOREEN
Well, I can help you with your
inventory. Here's my card. Next week,
I should have some time.
Kyle watches the door close. Discouraged, he looks at the
card.
EXT. SANTA BARBARA AIRPORT RUNWAY -- AFTERNOON
Carrying a briefcase, Kyle crosses the runway to a private
jet. CARMEN, a broadshouldered, diplomatic, exexutive
assistiant, greets him at the gangway.
CARMEN
Afternoon, sir. Everything in order?
KYLE
Yes, thank you. What time should we
expect to make New York?
CARMEN
Pilot estimates ten-thirty, Eastern.
Kyle studies Carmen for a moment.
KYLE
You look like someone I can trust.
Carmen gives him a quizzical look. Kyle hands him his
briefcase.
KYLE (CONT'D)
Take this and put on my desk in my
office. Make sure it's there by six
o'clock tomorrow morning.
CARMEN
Okay. And yourself?
KYLE
I'm flying back with you. I'll take
a taxi from the airport. Understand?
CARMEN
Certainly, sir. Anything else?
KYLE
Thank you.
CARMEN
With pleasure.
Kyle turns and walks briskly back to the terminal gate.
Without blinking, Carmen enters the plane, the gangway is
rolled back and the door closed.
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50.
INT. KYLES CAR -- AFTERNOON
Driving South on Interstate 101, Kyle calls Harold's cell
phone.
HAROLD
(on phone)
This is Harold.
KYLE
Haven't left work yet, have you?
There's a rough noise at the other end which turns into
Harold's laughter.
HAROLD
Sure, boss. Since you weren't around,
I left at four-thirty.
KYLE
Very funny.
HAROLD
Sometimes I wonder about you, Black.
KYLE
Okay. Now pay attention.
HAROLD
You know, Stern was poking around
here a little while ago, looking for
you.
KYLE
What'd you tell him?
HAROLD
Oh, I said you were on a rampage,
torturing all the project managers
in the building about deadlines.
KYLE
Swell. Any idea how long he's in
town?
HAROLD
Said he was on his way out. I'm sure
he left a message with Eileen.
KYLE
Okay. Now, I need two things from
you. First, if I don't show up
tomorrow morning by seven-thirty, I
want you to log me into the system
there, so it looks like I'm in.
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HAROLD
Just a second. Black?
KYLE
If you're not comfortable...
HAROLD
I have to apologize.
KYLE
Don't worry...
HAROLD
No. When you started, I took you for
much more of a tight-ass than you
are.
KYLE
Well, don't tell anyone. Remember
that HR system we looked at the other
day?
HAROLD
Sure. I found the server it's on. I
think we could run the logins through
some decryption analysis.
KYLE
I want you to add a record.
HAROLD
Okay.
INT. OFFICE SECURITY DESK -- EVENING
Two night-shift guards, MOUSEY and IRRITABLE, snap to
attention when Kyle approaches the desk.
IRRITABLE
Can we help you?
Kyle puts his hand on the scanner.
need a new scan
KYLE
On an inspection tour, gentlemen.
Mousey reaches for the phone.
KYLE (CONT'D)
Don't touch that phone!
Both guards react.
KYLE (CONT'D)
You'll find the clearance on the
system.
(MORE)
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KYLE (CONT'D)
My name is Winchester, from Corporate.
I'm part of an advance security-
inspection team. If you attempt to
warn anyone in the building, including
your fellow security officers, I
will have to abort the inspection,
which, I assure you, will make my
boss extremely angry .
Mousey sets back the phone. Irritable runs the hand-scanner,
which clears Kyle. He hands Kyle a temporary badge.
KYLE (CONT'D)
Thank you. How many personnel are
currently in the building?
Irritable glances at his screen.
IRRITABLE
Sixty-eight, sir.
KYLE
(surprised)
Is that typical?
IRRITABLE
Give or take a couple, yes sir.
KYLE
Give me a listing of their names and
departments, and a map.
Mousey runs the printout and hands it to Kyle. Kyle inspects
it.
KYLE (CONT'D)
Why they grey areas?
MOUSEY
Classified areas, sir.
KYLE
Okay. Thank you, gentlemen. Your
assitance will be noted in my report.
Authoritative, Kyle heads through the security gate.
Mousey silently mouths the words "ass-hole" to his fellow.
INT. LABORATORY CORRIDOR -- NIGHT
Kyle walks swiftly while simultaneously scanning the employee
listing. He stops at a door marked "Whiteacre -- Director,"
knocks and waits. He glances down the corridor and sees two
white-coat TECHNICIANS pass between doors. When the coast is
clear, he puts his hand on the scanner. The door unlocks.
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53.
INT. DOREEN'S OFFICE -- NIGHT
Kyle circles the immaculate room. Not a single loose paper
on the desk, table, or wastebasket, he can find nothing. The
filing cabinet is locked. Only a box of freshly-minted
business cards on the shelf. On his way out, he stops, sees
an ornate music-box, and opens the lid. The theme of "Ode to
Joy" plays. A chill runs down Kyle's spine. He snaps it shut,
looks around the room, which now seems vaguely foreboding,
and walks out.
INT. ELEVATOR -- NIGHT
Kyle selects a level.
ELEVATOR
Authorization.
He presses his hand against the scanner and the Elevator
moves.
INT. EXERCISE ROOM -- NIGHT
A row of a dozen treadmills occupy an otherwise nondescript
chamber. At the far end, An ATTENDANT stands with a PATIENT,
mid-20's, who walks, mechanically, gaze fixed on the blank,
white wall.
Kyle leaves the elevator and walks toward them. He notices a
sign:
"SILENCE IS STRICTLY OBSERVED AT ALL TIMES"
The Attendent acknowledges Kyle, briefly, and returns to her
observation of the Patient, who show no awareness of his
presence.
The elevator opens. A SECOND ATTENDENT, holding the hand of
a dazed YOUNG PATIENT, guides her to a treadmill. Neither
take any notice of the mystified Kyle.
INT. LABORATORY CORRIDOR -- NIGHT
Walking, Kyle notes he has no signal on his cell phone. He
stops at another door marked, "Observation 1221". The security
scanner allows him to enter.
INT. OBSERVATION ROOM -- NIGHT
A one-way mirror looks into a Lab with what resembles a
dentist's chair with an old-style hairdresser's dryer
attached. Several computer displays hum below the glass.
Kyle takes note opens the door to leave, just as two
businesslike, aproned, TECHNICIANS enter the Lab.
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54.
INT. LAB -- NIGHT
The Technicians efficiently prepare the room, turning on
computers, and whiping down the chair and headset. Jen,
sleeping, enters on wheelchair, pushed by a BORED ATTENDANT.
With great effort and the help of the Technicians, they lift
Jen onto the chair, strap down her limbs, and position the
headset. Nobody says a word.
INT. OBSERVATION ROOM -- NIGHT
Fascinated, Kyle sits in a comfortable chair. The computer
screens come on. The Attendant nods to the Technicians and
leaves. The Technicians begin work at computer terminals. A
3-D image of the Jen's brain appears on a monitor. Kyle
observes as areas of the frontal and medulla light up. Jen
twitches, as though dreaming.
Curious, Kyle starts exploring the computers in front of
him. On one screen appear the words, "Sequence Abort (Y/N)."
Kyle hits the "Y".
Jen screams and strains at his bonds. The Attendants rush to
her and remove the headset. She has become fully awake and
is terrified.
FIRST ATTENDANT
We had a sequence abort!
SECOND ATTENDANT
Thorazine.
They look toward the observation glass.
SECOND ATTENDANT (CONT'D)
Who's in there?
Kyle, realizes he's done something bad, stands, and quickly
leaves the room.
INT. LABORATORY CORRIDOR -- NIGHT
Kyle lets himself through another door, just as a SECURITY
TEAM, with IRRITABLE in the lead, rounds the corner at the
end of the hall.
INT. STABILIZATION ROOM -- NIGHT
Kyle walks slowly between a long row of beds, half of which
are occupied by SLEEPING PATIENTS, all healthy-appearing,
mid-20's and younger. Next to each bed is a small computer
interface. The room is dimly lit. Everything is white, down
to the patient's garb.
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55.
Kyle steps close to the bed of Clarence. He kneels down to
observe a thin wire running from his temple to the head of
the bed. Clarence clutches a violin to his chest.
He looks up and sees Doreen enter with TWO WHITECOAT
TECHNICIANS. They walk to a SLEEPING YOUNG WOMAN. Kyle hits
the deck.
Doreen works at the computer. Immediately the young woman
begins to groan and speak unintelligibly. The Technicians
restrain her sluggish movement. Doreen leans over closely.
DOREEN
Good morning, Isabelle. Let's go for
a walk.
The Technicians lift the Vacant and expressionless Young
Woman to her feet and they all slowly walk out. The lights
dim again.
INT. OFFICE SECURITY DESK -- NIGHT
With a breifcase and coat, Doreen exits the elevator and
heads for the door. She notices the Irritable Guard yawning.
DOREEN
Get enough sleep last night, Weaver?
IRRITABLE
Huh? Good night, Ms. Whiteacre.
DOREEN
Good night.
She walks out and another elevator opens and disgorges Kyle.
He walks quickly for the exit.
KYLE
See you tomorrow, gentlemen.
Both Guards eye him, suspiciously.
EXT. DOWNTOWN SANTA BARBARA ROAD -- NIGHT
Doreen drives a dilapidated Volkswagen to the loading door
of an unmarked warehouse. She gets out and unlocks the door
and dives her car in. Kyle drives by, makes a quick turn,
and rolls back, in view, with his lights off. He watches her
close the door.
Lights go on upstairs. Kyle hesitates, then leaves his car
and goes to locate the door. Circling the building, he stops
at a little-used door.
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56.
EXT. DOREEN'S WAREHOUSE -- NIGHT
Kyle looks for a doorbell. The door opens, suddenly. He
stumbles back.
Doreen, transformed from a button-down corporate manager to
black tights, and a black Ministry t-shirt with THIEVES in
bold letters across the back, holds a drink in a glass. She
hands it to Kyle.
DOREEN
You're just in time for a nightcap.
She holds the door for him.
INT. DOREEN'S WAREHOUSE -- NIGHT
Doreen and Kyle enter her living room. The decor is a jumbled
mixture of scientifica, neurological diagrams, and photographs
of cats.
Befuddled, Kyle follows her through the large room.
DOREEN
So, Mr. Software Director, are
security breaches and sabotage part
of your job description?
KYLE
I have responsibility for all software
systems employed at Nebulous. To be
honest, for all its sophistication,
the security system you've got here
wouldn't stop a spy or a smart kid
with a laptop.
DOREEN
So, which are you?
Kyle nods, acknowledging the touche. He studies a cat-photo.
She keeps a comfortable distance.
DOREEN (CONT'D)
Venus. She was good.
KYLE
You like cats.
DOREEN
Are you pretending I don't know you
were skulking around my lab for the
last four hours?
KYLE
What is it? Sleep studies? Mental
patients?
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57.
DOREEN
You could really get us both into a
lot of trouble. What if Stern finds
out? Maybe I like my job.
KYLE
What's PR-spin? Quietly testing some
new psychiatric drug?
He moves closer to her. She stiffens.
KYLE (CONT'D)
Maybe we can talk to him together.
DOREEN
This is good. I like relentless.
Kyle kisses her. She enjoys it, but turns away casually when
it's over.
KYLE
Give me the scoop. What were you
doing at that conference in China?
She considers.
DOREEN
The conference never happened.
KYLE
What do you mean?
DOREEN
Those people aren't sick.
Truth dawns. Kyle sits.
KYLE
They're recruits.
DOREEN
This is the Nebulous Management
Training program. We have another
facility in Idaho and one in the
South Pacific. You're a top graduate,
Kyle.
Kyle swallows, dismayed by where this is going.
KYLE
What did you do? How long was I-?
DOREEN
Six months.
KYLE
Why can't I remember?
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58.
DOREEN
Think back to the recruit-party at
Stern's. You drank too much. You
can't remember how you got back home,
either.
INT. STERN'S HOME -- NIGHT
The Mentor Program Recuits mill around the mansion, happily,
drinking, ready to embark on their new lives.
LATER:
Kyle has trouble focusing his eyes. A WOMAN speaks to him
about her home in Alabama. He can't take his eyes off her
cleavage. Out of the corner of his eye, he sees someone fall
over.
LATER:
Everywhere in the house, the Recruits have fallen, collapsed,
or sagged into semi-coma. Doors open and suddenly the house
is crawling with MEDICAL TECHNICIANS. The Recruits are
maneuvered onto stretchers and carried away. Stern remains,
alone, sitting with a drink.
DOREEN (V.O.)
You didn't return home. Nobody did.
You were drugged and transported to
the Center. It's not an easy
operation.
INT. STABILIZATION ROOM -- DAY
Kyle, dressed in a patient's pajamas, sleeps along with the
other recruits. The Technicians carefully check and adjust
each Recruit and position portable electronic devices over
their heads.
DOREEN (V.O.)
When the drugs wore off, you were
already attached to a Mentor
interface. The electrical delta-
stimulus kept you in a passive,
receptive state. You were fed through
a tube, walked on a treadmill, and
slept for sixteen hours everyday,
between sessions. When you woke up,
you were home.
INT. DEN, DOREEN'S WAREHOUSE -- NIGHT
The alcohol and revelations enhance Kyle's confusion.
DOREEN
You've had a long day.
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59.
She pours him another drink while he broods.
KYLE
What a mind fuck.
DOREEN
Think of it as plastic surgery for
the mind. Yes, your personality has
changed, but only along a natural
inclination. Some conflicted traits
have subsided, insubordination,
motivation problems. Now, you're
just hungry to learn. You like power.
KYLE
Have you-?
DOREEN
No. My neural structures are
incompatible. Believe me, I would do
it in an instant if I could.
Kyle downs his glass.
KYLE
Stern manufactures himself a loyal,
hyperproductive workforce.
DOREEN
Soon, this discovery will belong to
everyone. We just have to develop it
a little further.
Doreen seduces by evading
Kyle stands up and moves close to her again. Still the
scientist, she restrains her own desire.
KYLE
My father died while I was in there.
DOREEN
It was difficult for us. We had to
set the speech in a remote location,
to justify your delayed response.
She sets up a demonstration...
KYLE
Show it to me.
She leads him to a workroom with several computers, electronic
components, and tools. She points to A Mentor System rig,
identical to those in the Laboratory Stabilization room.
KYLE (CONT'D)
I want a demonstration. What's the
shortest program you've got?
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60.
DOREEN
Five minutes. It wouldn't be
difficult.
INT. DOREEN'S WORKROOM -- NIGHT
Kyle lies on a futon, the Mentor equipment positioned at his
head. Doreen prepares the program. She connects a single
wire with a patch to Kyle's temple, and turns on the system.
DOREEN
The neuro-harmonics are more effective
if you can allow your mind to drift,
like when you fall asleep. Let
thoughts come and go on their own.
You know, like a meditation. In a
few moments, you'll enter a lucid-
dream state. Then, I'll start the
program.
KYLE
What will it be?
DOREEN
Nothing specific. It's called a
receptive-recursive cycle. It tends
to enhance your thought process,
briefly. What Freud called magical
thinking. Make whatever you want
into reality. Everyone who's tried
it says it's good.
KYLE
Alright, I'm sold.
DOREEN
Breathe.
Kyle closes his eyes for a few moments. He tries to relax.
She curses under her breath. He sneaks a peek at her.
KYLE
Something wrong?
DOREEN
Just be patient. It's not starting.
KYLE
When I was under before-
DOREEN
Training-
KYLE
Training. Was there ever a problem?
Troubled, she stops her work and looks at him.
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61.
DOREEN
The facility is only a couple years
old. We've had a few bugs. There was
a network-glitch. It caused a
fluctuation in half of the training
connectors. Some of the patients
immediately went into status seizures.
Others had no problem at all. A few,
like you, woke up.
She looks at his face and strokes his head.
DOREEN (CONT'D)
Every subject, without exception,
who has woken up from the program,
has suffered from major psychological
disruptions...
KYLE
Disruptions.
DOREEN
Acute paranoia, delusions,
schizophrenia.
KYLE
So what happened?
DOREEN
You went back to sleep.
Doreen's POV?
DOREEN (CONT'D)
We shot you with enough thorazine to
drop a horse. You were still wide
awake. I tried to comfort you.
He pulls her down to him.
KYLE
I think I need more comforting.
Losing interest in the demonstration, they succomb to their
desires. Kyle helps her out of her clothes. They take the
bed by storm, consuming one another ravenously.
INT. DOREEN'S WORKROOM -- MORNING
Kyle wakes, still clothed, and removes the wire from his
temple. Doreen crosses the room, getting dressed for work.
KYLE
What-?
DOREEN
Morning. I assume you're flying back
to New York today.
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62.
He stretches and sits up, groggily.
KYLE
The demonstration.
DOREEN
What do you recall?
KYLE
We made love.
Amused, she brushes her hair.
DOREEN
Really? I'm flattered.
KYLE
It was very real.
DOREEN
Of course. You might as well consider
it real.
Kyle stands and walks behind her, puts his arms around, and
fondles her breasts. She blushes, but doesn't try to stop
him.
KYLE
It's not quite satisfying to think
it didn't happen.
She sets down the brush and turns to complete the embrace.
DOREEN
I'm sorry.
KYLE
I'm sorry for both of us.
DOREEN
Maybe we should do something about
it.
Shaking with excitement, she puts her hands into his pants
and eases them down his legs. He guides her, backward, to
the bed where they descend with even more intense passion.
INT. DOREEN'S WORKROOM -- NIGHT
Kyle opens his eyes and looks at Doreen sleeping next to
him, naked.
R.J. (O.S.)
The brain's approach to problem
solving, is to develop a coherent
'experience' which can be played
(MORE)
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63.
R.J. (O.S.) (CONT'D)
over and over, successively, in the
unconscious. A kind of obsessive
learning process, wouldn't you agree?
Kyle sits up and discovers Dr. Bitterroot relaxing in a
cushioned chair, with a whisky, neat.
R.J. (CONT'D)
Hello, Kyle. What do you think of my
invention?
KYLE
I can't decide-
R.J.
If it's good or evil.
KYLE
No. What I am now.
R.J.
Ah. A better question: An individual
or a product, and what's the
difference?
KYLE
Who are you?
R.J.
(shrugs)
I suppose the answer is, whoever you
want me to be.
Kyle gets up and dresses. He glances down at Doreen, still
sleeping. He walks and looks out the window at the ocean.
KYLE
She's not real.
R.J.
Not the "real" Ms. Whitecomb, as you
want to say. But, curiously enough,
I think she's just as either of you
want her to be.
KYLE
(irritated)
What if I change my mind?
R.J.
Another good question: what if we
change it for you.
Kyle looks back to the bed. Lechner, fully clothed and bored,
sips his own whisky.
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64.
LECHNER
Solve the problem yourself, Kyle.
You hold the answer.
ANOTHER LECHNER (O.S.)
Or better yet-
Kyle turns to see Lechner seated in Bitterroot's place.
ANOTHER LECHNER (CONT'D)
You are the answer. What is the
question?
KYLE
(exasperated)
Okay. I've had enough.
INT. DOREEN'S WORKROOM -- NIGHT
Kyle sits up and rips the wire off his head. Doreen gets up
from the chair.
DOREEN
Careful. Try to move slowly for
awhile.
KYLE
I didn't like that.
She reaches him and daubs the small spot of blood forming at
his temple with an antiseptic wipe.
DOREEN
I'm sorry, it can be a bit
frustrating. That's why it's limited
to 5 minutes.
KYLE
You're not kidding. I need another
drink.
She heads for the kitchen.
DOREEN
Let me start some coffee. It's almost
daylight.
Kyle turns to the window. The faint glow of early dawn
illustrates the sky over the ocean.
INT. UBIQUISOFT CONFERENCE ROOM -- DAY
Kyle leads a meeting with his ENGINEERING TEAM. More
professional than ever, he reveals little evidence of an
internal struggle which rages.
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65.
KYLE (V.O.)
What could I do? I went back to
work. Pretended nothing had changed.
When someone tells you that thing
you were so sure happened was just a
dream, does that make it any less
real? If anything, it became more
real to me. Was it denial or
commitment? If this was my destiny,
then I put myself even more to the
task of perfection. I would become
that man Stern had groomed me to be.
And more.
INT. NEBULOUS CORPORATE HQ -- DAY
Kyle opens his mouth to speak to a RECEPTIONIST, just as his
cellphone rings. They exchange an understanding smile and he
answers.
KYLE
Yes?
DOREEN
(on phone)
I need to conduct a follow-up
examination.
KYLE
(hushed)
I thought you said we couldn't see
each other for awhile.
DOREEN
It's been three weeks.
KYLE
Okay.
DOREEN
I'm coming out there, this time.
KYLE
Okay. Uh. Listen, I'm about to go
into a meeting with Stern.
DOREEN
Don't keep him waiting. I'll be there
Monday. I'm staying in the Stanhope.
Kyle hangs up and turns to face the smiling Receptionist who
probably heard everything. She points toward the Board Room.
INT. NEBULOUS BOARD ROOM -- DAY
The meeting not yet in-progress, SENIOR MANAGERS AND DIRECTORS
filter in and take their seats.
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66.
while Kyle nervously takes a seat near the back. Stern,
conversing with a FRENCH DIRECTOR, a savvy mid-60's patrician,
notices Kyle and gestures him to a seat at his right.
STERN
(in French)
Pierre, this is our manager from the
software group, Kyle Black.
FRENCH DIRECTOR
(in French)
Ah, yes. The young man from
Ubiquisoft. I believe he has a
reputation already.
KYLE
(in French)
A good one, I hope.
The Director and Stern are startled and pleased by Kyle's
fluency.
FRENCH DIRECTOR
(in French)
Nothing that can't be repaired through
tenacity.
They shake hands. Stern calls the meeting to order.
STERN
Good afternoon everyone. Let's get
down to business.
The room quiets. Notebooks and PDA's come out. Stern takes a
silent inventory.
STERN (CONT'D)
Glad everyone could make it. We'll
be quick. First, as you all know,
regardless of how multinational
Nebulous has become, we are still
not immune to localized fluctuations
and trade-disputes. Appropriately,
some of our significant investors...
He nods slightly at each Director, in turn:
STERN (CONT'D)
Goldman Sachs, Microsoft, Vanguard...
Have expressed concern that we should
expect diminishing results from some
of our manufacturing and
telecommunications operations and
assets over the next year.
(MORE)
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67.
STERN (CONT'D)
As a result, I am preparing to
introduce an across-the-board cost-
cutting program which will trim a
billion dollars from our budget.
The Directors applaud, politely. The rest respond with
muttered concerns. Kyle doesn't know which to do.
STERN (CONT'D)
We will review the program in two
weeks, on the eighth of April, here
in this room. Thank you. Questions?
Unprepared, most just sit, mutely.
SEASONED MANAGER
If you don't mind, is it perhaps
possible that we could hear a bit of
strategy for these cost reductions?
STERN
You've been through this before,
Ike.
IKE
Sure, but if we cut so much out of
our budgets, how are we going to
avoid killing the innovation we
consider so important.
STERN
I think you're confusing innovation
with opulence.
IKE
I'd hardly call some of our research
programs opulent.
Dissent rises in the room. Kyle clears his throat.
KYLE
Mr. Stern?
STERN
You have a comment to make, Mr. Black?
KYLE
(nervous)
Ah. I would recommend we focus on
the known synergies between various
Nebulous assets and seek to enhance
those, while trimming non-critical
areas.
With reservations, most agree.
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68.
STERN
Well put. Now let's move on. If any
of you has a recommendation, please
submit them to me via email.
The managers acknowledge, tensely.
INT. HALLWAY, NEBULOUS CORPORATE HQ -- DAY
In his effortless manner, Stern heads for the elevator. Kyle
rushes to catch up with him. Stern notices.
STERN
How is Ubiquisoft, Kyle? I'm hearing
good things.
KYLE
Busy. We've got a deadline practically
every week now. Can we-?
STERN
You gave a good answer in there. The
Board will remember that.
They enter an elevator together. Stern hits his own button,
then, Kyle's.
KYLE
Thank you. Can I talk to you about-?
STERN
We should discuss expanding your
responsibilities. There are many
programs which could benefit from
fresh oversight.
Kyle hits the Emergency Stop button. The elevator stops.
KYLE
The Mentor Program.
Kyle's approach amuses Stern.
STERN
I admire your determiniation, Kyle.
The Mentor Program has an excellent
management team at the moment.
KYLE
Why is it classified?
STERN
Good reasons. Privacy among them.
KYLE
I'd like to get involved.
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69.
Stern turns the elevator back on.
STERN
I'll take it into consideration.
The current Director, Doreen
Whiteacre, will be here next week.
I'll ask her to give you a call.
The elevator door opens. Kyle steps out.
KYLE
Thank you, sir.
Stern holds the door.
STERN
I've said this before. You're still
young here. Don't get carried away.
He lets the door close.
EXT. STANHOPE HOTEL -- DAY
A cab drops Kyle in front of the hotel. The DOORMAN holds
the door for him.
INT. LOBBY, STANHOPE -- DAY
Kyle scans the lobby. A few TOURISTS schlepp bags and glance,
indifferently. He spots DOREEN, dressed in a new outfit and
tinted glasses. She smiles, slightly, when she sees him.
stronger
KYLE
Every time I see you, I like you
more.
DOREEN
Maybe I shouldn't have called.
KYLE
I was going to call you.
DOREEN
I need food.
She puts her arm through his. They stroll casually for the
door.
KYLE
Let me take you to this place I know.
DOREEN
Is it far?
KYLE
Short cab ride.
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70.
The Doorman holds the door. They stop.
DOREEN
Maybe we can find something closer.
INT. DREAM ROOM -- DAY
Naked, Kyle studies an illuminated model of a brain in his
hands. Electricity flashes inside.
INT. DOREEN'S ROOM, STANHOPE -- DAY
Kyle lies on the bed in a room devoid of color.
INT. DOREEN'S ROOM, STANHOPE -- DAY
The lock turns and Kyle and Doreen burst in, already half-
undressed. Immersed in one-another, they feel their way to
the table. Kyle hoists her onto the table. She touches the
Room Service menu.
DOREEN
What would you like me to order?
KYLE
Anything you want.
She pushes the menu off the table and leans backward, pulling
him with her by his collar. It's no longer food they're hungry
for.
INT. DOREEN'S ROOM, STANHOPE -- DAY
DOREEN
Room service tray and plates covered
with partially eaten salads and
fishcakes, clothes strewn over the
furniture, Kyle "comes-to" as he's
making love to Doreen on the tousseled
bed. They climax together and bask
in the afterglow. My compliments on
the choice of cuisine.
KYLE
Sometimes location is everything.
Doreen gets up and goes into the bathroom. Kyle notices her
large purse by the bed and looks inside. He sifts through
the usual vanity supplies.
DOREEN
How are you feeling these days, Kyle?
KYLE
Good.
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71.
Kyle finds an electronic connector with a long, thin wire.
He quickly puts it back.
DOREEN
Not obsessing about the Mentor
Program?
KYLE
No. Why?
Doreen returns and gets back into bed. She spies a drop of
blood formed at Kyle's left temple and rubs it off with her
thumb. He sees the smear of blood on her thumb.
DOREEN
I wanted to ask. Strawberry.
Doreen gives Kyle a strawberry, which he eats.
KYLE
I recently discovered that I have a
pretty good command of French. I
never even studied it in school.
DOREEN
It's what we term "collateral
adjustment." Each of the training
programs are built specifically from
one or more real person's neural
patterns, called an "accretion." We
enhance them significantly to create
a series of progressive experiences.
The French is a trace of that original
accretion.
KYLE
So, whose neural patterns was my
program built on?
DOREEN
Stern's. And Dr. Bitterroot.
KYLE
What does Nebulous do with the people
who don't make it though the Mentor
Program?
This question hits an uncomfortable cord.
DOREEN
I thought you said you weren't
obsessing.
Kyle turns her their focus to earlier pleasures.
KYLE
I'm not.
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72.
Kyle's cell-phone rings. He and Doreen share a look of
annoyance. Kyle checks the caller ID, sighs, and answers:
KYLE (CONT'D)
Yes?
HUGHES
(on phone)
Mr. Black?
KYLE
Who is this?
HUGHES
Braxton Hughes, Director of Security
for Nebulous Corporation. I like to
meet with you. The sooner, the better.
KYLE
Mind if I ask what it's regarding?
HUGHES
I'm investigating a security-breach
that occurred recently at on of our
research facilities. I'll explain it
further when we meet.
KYLE
Okay. Fine. I'll be there.
HUGHES
Thank you. Oh, and sir, I'd like to
ask you not to mention this to anyone.
KYLE
No problem. Bye.
He hangs up and stares at Doreen. She comprehends.
DOREEN
You have to go.
Elevator problem. Kyle winds up back on Doreen's floor. Sees
technicians packing up equipment.
INT. HOTEL ELEVATOR -- DAY
Kyle realizes he's forgotten his jacket. He rides back to
Doreen's floor. The door opens. She's waiting with his coat.
He takes it. The door closes:
KYLE
Call you later...
Kyle realizes the elevator is going up.
KYLE (CONT'D)
Fuck!
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73.
TWO OLD COUPLES board the elevator and it heads down. Again
the door's open on Doreen's floor. Everyone waits, annoyed.
As the doors close, THREE WHITECOAT TECHNICIANS wheel heavy
travel-cases out of Doreen's room. Kyle jams his hand between
the doors, but continues to watch.
RASPY OLD LADY
You gettin' off here, young man?
Kyle shakes his head and lets the doors close. One technician
glances his way as they shut.
INT. CONFERENCE ROOM, NEBULOUS HQ -- DAY
Kyle and Hughes study each other like chess opponents.
HUGHES
You've been very successful here,
Black.
KYLE
Thank you.
HUGHES
I don't trust a man who rises quickly.
It usually means he's doing
something... unseemly.
KYLE
Funny. I don't trust "Security
Officers" who project conspiracy on
everyone they meet.
HUGHES
Let's not waste time. You recall
meeting the former director of Energy
Research?
KYLE
The guy who quit?
HUGHES
Was fired.
KYLE
Oh. Guess you can't trust the
grapevine.
HUGHES
Vernon Baxter. Did you ever have
opportunity to speak to this man in
person?
KYLE
Well, let's see... he stopped by my
office right after I came on.
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74.
HUGHES
What did he say?
KYLE
Um. Nice office. Something about
flies.
HUGHES
Flies?
KYLE
Buzzing.
HUGHES
Flies buzzing. Anything else?
KYLE
That's it.
HUGHES
Three weeks ago, you flew to Santa
Barbara and visited a Biotechnology
research facility in Ohai.
KYLE
Has it been that long?
HUGHES
What was your business there?
KYLE
Well, as director of software for
the entire Nebulous Corporation, as
well as its subsidiaries, I have
been conducting an inventory of
systems currently deployed...
HUGHES
And this "inventory" includes hacking
the security database, modifying
records, and entering the facility
under an assumed credential?
KYLE
I was me. As I mentioned to the
Director, Miss... uh.
He waits for Hughes to fill in the name, but he doesn't.
KYLE (CONT'D)
It was nothing more than a simple
test of system integrity. I think
both of us would be held responsible
if a breach occurred.
Hughes drops a stack of digital photos on the table of Kyle
skulking around the laboratory.
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75.
HUGHES
An that test included these
activities?
KYLE
I had a look around.
Hughes smoulders and grows a bit larger.
HUGHES
I'm watching you very closely, Black.
And here's why: Someone is stealing
technology, secrets, whatever you
want to call it, from our
"biotechnology" labs. There's evidence
of what you would call an auction. I
have a good idea who it is. Make
sure you have nothing connecting you
with this. When I clean up, I clean
up everything.
Hughes gives Kyle a look that would boil a gallon of water.
INT. KYLE'S C.C.L. OFFICE -- DAY
Kyle logs into a personnel system and looks up Vernon Baxter.
The "Termination Date" is 4/19/09. A note indicates Baxter's
wife, Clara, is receiving death benefits.
He accesses a New York City Coroner database and cross-
references the name. Baxter is listed as having died of a
"Cerebral Hemmorage resulting from high blood pressure."
Kyle pulls a printout of Doreen's security file out of his
locked desk drawer. He picks up the phone.
KYLE
Whiteacre's office, please. Yes.
This is- accounting.
INT. DOREEN'S OFFICE -- DAY
She answers her phone.
DOREEN
Whiteacre. Hello? Hello?
She hangs up and wonders.
INT. KYLE'S C.C.L. OFFICE -- DAY
Kyle hangs up. He folds the printout and pockets it.
Kyle wonders if Quincy could know him.
Kyle learns the history of Bitterroot's program. One of his
brilliant grad students hooked himself up and fried his brain.
Bitterroot was quietly asked to leave. Stern purchased the
Rorschach Inst. and set up the program there. A newspaper
article makes it look like Bitterroot "retires."
INT. HALLWAY, M.I.T -- DAY
Kyle slowly walks the hallway he's walked hundreds of times.
He chooses a doorway with the nameplate removed and knocks.
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76.
VOICE (O.S.)
Come in.
Kyle opens the door to an office jammed wall-to-wall with
journals, books, and other scientific writings. A large,
rolltop desk collects dust. Opposite, sits Kyle's friend
Quincy, slightly aged. Quincy's annoyance turns to muted
surprise.
QUINCY
Ah. Hello? Can I help you?
KYLE
Quincy! What are you doing here?
QUINCY
Do we know each other?
KYLE
Do we?
QUINCY
Not that I can say.
KYLE
Mind if I ask what you do here?
QUINCY
Well, non-specifically, I'm a
professor of Psychology.
KYLE
You're Quincy Farnes. Gooche's Hollar,
Kentucky. Undergrad Shuffleboard
Champion of Cambridge.
QUINCY
You read about this somewhere?
KYLE
What happened to the Cognative Science
department?
QUINCY
Long gone.
KYLE
Gone?
QUINCY
Yup. Shut down. Are you a journalist?
I really must get back to work.
Unfazed, Kyle hands him his card with a handwritten number.
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77.
KYLE
No. I'm interested in the work of
Dr. Bitterroot. Here's my number at
the Hyatt, if you find you have time
to talk.
Quincy accepts the card, politely. Kyle leaves.
EXT. HALLWAY, M.I.T -- DAY
Kyle inspects the door where the neameplate used to be. He
leans closer to catch the sound of Quincy's voice.
QUINCY (O.S.)
No. He was just here. Today. Yes.
I'm not sure. This is our oppurtunity.
Can you get your people together?
Immediately.
The phone slams down. Kyle makes a quick move around the
corner, as Quincy opens his door and looks around.
INT. BAR, CAMBRIDGE -- DAY
Two beers down, Quincy opens up to Kyle.
QUINCY
You kinda freaked me out with that
"I know you" stuff, today.
KYLE
I think Stern stole the technology
from Dr. Bitterroot and developed
it.
QUINCY
No. Stern owns Bitterroot.
KYLE
He's using the system on people.
QUINCY
Nah. It's not developed enough yet.
KYLE
I've been on it.
QUINCY
What do you remember?
KYLE
I don't know.
QUINCY
What do you mean, you don't know?
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78.
KYLE
I can't tell the difference between
a real memory and a program.
QUINCY
If it worked, that's what would
happen.
KYLE
It works.
QUINCY
No it doesn't. Low-grade patterning
lasts about 36 hours. Real learning
requires high-energy forced-resonance.
Bitterroot used one of his research
team as a test-subject. The forced-
resonance stimulus of the medulla
set off a chain-reaction which whiped
out his memory, thought,
consciousness, everything. If you
want to see the results, he's in the
Rorshach Institute in North Albany.
Crestfallen, Kyle gropes for possibilities.
KYLE
But it works. I've seen it.
QUINCY
(shrugs)
I don't think so. I've spent the
last three years proving it.
KYLE
But-
QUINCY
Listen, you need help. Maybe you had
an accident or something.
KYLE
No accident.
QUINCY
(shakes his head)
I wish I could help you, man.
KYLE
Do you know someone named- Whiteacre.
Kyle shakes off a wave of dizziness.
QUINCY
Never heard of her.
He looks at Kyle, who is having trouble focusing his eyes.
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79.
QUINCY (CONT'D)
You feel okay?
KYLE
Yeah. It's just a-
Kyle collapses. Quincy moves quickly to catch him. He walks
Kyle out of the bar, waving-off a few DISTRACTED PATRONS.
QUINCY
Just missed a couple night's sleep
is all.
INT. WINDOWLESS OFFICE CUBICLE -- DAY
Kyle wakes up, face down on the keyboard of his computer,
and looks around.
INT. WELDING ROOM -- DAY
Art stops the welder and climbs up onto the work area to
make adjustments. He sees Kyle without looking down.
ART
Hey, kid. How's the new job?
KYLE
Um. Not what I expected.
ART
(laughs)
Shit. You're sittin' at a desk all
day. Talk about goddamn useless
employment.
KYLE
No, I mean something's wrong. I'm
like falling asleep and having these
wierd dreams. I dreamt you were dead.
Art disconnects a fat cable from the welder arm and lowers
it to Kyle.
ART
Here. Don't touch that connector
unless you want the 20,000 volt
handshake. Set it on the ground.
That's it. I don't think a desk job
suits you. Why don't you try and
spend some time out here on the floor?
We can take a look at the operations
and work on your report.
KYLE
I'd like that.
Kyle studies the high-voltage cable.
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80.
INT. KYLE'S HOTEL ROOM -- NIGHT
Kyle wakes with a gasp as Quincy disconnects a Mentor Probe
from his temple. He blinks at a room filled with CHINESE
INDUSTRIALISTS, gravely observing him, and conversing quietly
to each other.
QUINCY
Relax, Kyle. I apologize for treating
you like this. But it's really outside
of my control.
YOUNG INDUSTRIALIST
We want a demonstration with one of
our own workers.
QUINCY
Of course. You've got to understand
the amount of preparation however.
We would require a down payment and
three months to establish an
operational center in your territory.
An OLD BUSINESSMAN shakes his head and says something which
his ASSISTANT translates:
ASSISTANT
(to Kyle)
You feel any side effects?
Kyle sits up, slowly and looks at the Mentor System next to
his bed, then at Quincy.
KYLE
Who are these people?
QUINCY
Investors, Kyle. I'll explain in a
few minutes.
(turns)
Gentlemen, I'll have to ask you to
leave now. You may submit your bids
by nine o'clock this evening, using
the established channel.
He holds the door and nods at each, in turn. With room
cleared, Quincy pours Kyle a glass of water.
QUINCY (CONT'D)
I'm sorry about that. Those people
are interested in the Mentor
technology. We can make a lot of
money.
KYLE
(confused)
Make a lot of?- what are you selling?
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81.
Quincy taps Kyle's head.
QUINCY
This is a commodity, Kyle. You're
the worker of the future. You were
almost right. Stern did steal the
technology. I worked on it for three
years, like a slave. Now I'm going
to get something back.
Two knocks on the door.
VOICE (O.S.)
Room Service!
Quincy goes to the peephole.
QUINCY
We didn't order room service!
With a gentle POP! and a few splinters, Quincy staggers
backward, blood running from his empty eye socket, and
collapses. A key rattles in the door and in walks Hughes,
wearing a room service uniform, and surgical gloves, as he
pockets a small pistol and silencer. He drags Quincy out of
the way of the door. Doreen enters and checks Kyle's eye
with a penlight.
DOREEN
Did he connect you?
Kyle pushes her out of his way and heads for the door.
KYLE
Get me the fuck out of here.
DOREEN
Kyle, I want to help you.
Without turning, Kyle exits. Hughes moves to pursue him, but
Doreen stops him.
DOREEN (CONT'D)
Let him go.
RORSACH INSTITUTE, NEW YORK -- DAY
Kyle drives a rental car to the shaded, multi-building,
Victorian-era mansion. The quiet, almost romantic grounds
would better suit an elderly-care home, than a facility for
the seriously deranged. Kyle clips a new badge on his jacket
on his way up the steps.
INT. INSTITUTE RECEPTION AREA -- DAY
A few DOCTORS and RESEARCHERS come and go, while Kyle waits
for the Receptionist to finish a phone call.
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She glances at his badge.
RECEPTIONIST
Good afternoon, Dr. Black. How can I
help you?
KYLE
I've just transferred to this facility
and I'm supposed to get a tour with
a Dr. Bitterroot.
He smiles. She's charmed.
RECEPTIONIST
Hmmm. Who would that be? What's your
field?
KYLE
Neuro-Cybernetics.
RECEPTIONIST
Wow! That sounds cool. I guess that
would be neurology, right?
KYLE
Close enough for me.
RECEPTIONIST
Just a second.
She dials.
RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D)
(cheery)
Hello? It's Shaila. How's it going?
There's a Dr. Black here for a tour
with the director. Oh? I see. Oh,
that would be great.
She beams hangs up.
RECEPTIONIST (CONT'D)
I'm sorry. Dr. Bitterroot isn't in
right now. But, Dr. Richards is on
his way down.
KYLE
Thank you. I think I'll like this
place.
RECEPTIONIST
Oh, sure you will. Dr, Bitterroot is
a genius. So do you know your way
around Albany?
KYLE
Never been here before.
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RECEPTIONIST
Well, at 7 o'clock a few of us get
together and head out for a drink.
If you'd like to join us. Might be a
good way to get the lay of the land.
KYLE
Sounds great. I'll make it my goal.
Dr. Richards, a mid-40's black man, used to juggling women
and a number of serious responsibilities.
RICHARDS
Hi, Shaila. Hello, you must be Dr.
Black.
KYLE
That's me.
They shake.
RICHARDS
Well, I apologize. Dr. Bitterroot
didn't mention he was expecting
anyone.
KYLE
Well, if it's not a good time.
RICHARDS
We've constantly got new people coming
through here. We're not very good at
the welcoming business.
KYLE
Shaila's done a great job.
She likes that comment. Dr. Richards indicates his gratitude.
RICHARDS
Thanks, Shaila. Don't know where
we'd be without you.
RECEPTIONIST
Just appreciate what you've got,
honey.
INT. INSTITUTE HALLWAY -- DAY
Kyle and Dr. Richards walk together, avoiding busy STAFFERS,
as they go.
RICHARDS
So, where are you from?
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KYLE
Nebulous Corporation. I'm the Software
Director.
RICHARDS
Interesting. What brings you here?
KYLE
Oh, I'm just performing a general
survey of systems and resources.
RICHARDS
So, you work with Dr. Whiteacre?
KYLE
Only superficially.
RICHARDS
I see. Well, then. Shall we see the
grounds?
KYLE
Certainly.
EXT. GARDENS, RORSCHACH INSTITUTE -- DAY
A dozen or so PATIENTS with various intractable nervous
conditions wander the groomed landscape. Dr. Richards leads
Kyle down the ramp from the Institute into the garden.
RICHARDS
Dr. Bitterroot has brought hope to
these people and their families. Mr.
Lawrence, for instance.
Dr. Richards leads them to a mid-20's patient, LAWRENCE,
working at an abstract, colorful, oil painting.
RICHARDS (CONT'D)
Mr. Lawrence! How are we today?
LAWRENCE
D-D-Done making a- picture for daddy.
RICHARDS
How wonderful! Daddy will be so
pleased!
Lawrence blushes and then forgets the conversation.
RICHARDS (CONT'D)
(to Kyle)
Lawrence's frontal lobes were
irrepairably damaged when he smacked
into a wall doing 40 on his
motorcycle.
(MORE)
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RICHARDS (CONT'D)
Dr. Bitterroot has helped his brain
replace the lost functions by forming
new neural pathways. He's turned out
to be a very talented painter.
They stoll down to the pond where Clarence expertly plays a
complex violin piece for Jen and Rudy. When he finishes, all
applaud.
RICHARDS (CONT'D)
Very good, Clarence!
(leads Kyle away)
Clarence was autistic who had
demonstrated some savant capabilities.
In less than 3 months, Dr. Bitterroot
had him playing baroque quartets.
They walk to the patio to sit near TWO CHESSPLAYERS. Kyle
glances at a Wheelchair-bound, PATIENT, who awkwardly stares
back, head lolling. The Patient makes a moaning sound and
knocks a lidded cup onto the grass. Kyle picks it up and
hands it back. The Patient knocks it out of Kyle's hand.
RICHARDS (CONT'D)
Freddy! Be polite.
Dr. Richards takes the cup and snaps it into a holder on the
wheelchair. He looks back toward the pond and sees Dr.
Bitterroot, surrounded by his adoring patients.
RICHARDS (CONT'D)
I'm sorry. Oh, Dr. Bitterroot has
returned.
They walk down to meet Dr. Bitterroot. Lawrence runs ahead
of them.
LAWRENCE
Daddy!
Dr. Bitterroot gently hugs his patients one at a time. He
turns and sees Kyle and Richards.
R.J.
Good afternoon, Dr. Richards. Ah,
Dr. Black, I'd heard you might be
paying us a visit.
RICHARDS
You know each other?
R.J.
Professionally. Would you be able to
joing me for a drink in my office,
Dr. Black?
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KYLE
Ah. I might do without the drink. It
hasn't been treating me well, lately.
R.J.
Of course!
INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE, INSTITUTE -- DAY
Kyle and Dr. Bitterroot observe through a one-way mirror.
Alone, Freddy, sleeps, connected to the Mentor System.
R.J.
I understand your frustration, Dr.
Black. But I have to say, that I'm
not sure you appreciate what you
have.
KYLE
It's difficult if you don't know
what it is.
R.J.
I think you're making it difficult
for yourself. There are many people
looking out for you.
KYLE
Is it me they care about, or their
investment?
R.J.
We shouldn't test our friends.
KYLE
If we know who they are.
R.J.
You see this man here? I would give
up all of this-
(gestures)
to have his mind back.
KYLE
Noble.
R.J.
He was my friend.
KYLE
I see. Well, I'm going to ask you,
did Stern steal the Mentor System
from you?
R.J.
No.
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KYLE
Do you know what they put in my head?
R.J.
Yes. I suggested it to them.
KYLE
What is it?
R.J.
If there were anyone you could ask,
it would be him.
KYLE
Who?
Dr. Bitterroot indicates Freddy.
INT. VAULT, INSTITUTE -- DAY
Dr, Bitterroot show's Kyle a large vault, lined floor to
ceiling, with racks of optical disks.
R.J.
I think you've already discovered
that the Mentor System functions on
the principle of the plasticity of
experience. This is our library of
experiences which we use to create
the programs.
Kyle studies the name tags on the racks.
Kyle steals a disk labelled "Stern"
INT. KYLE'S C.C.L. OFFICE -- DAY
Unable to concentrate, Kyle stares out of his window. He
opens a drawer and takes out the folded painting by Dr.
Bitterroot.
KYLE (V.O.)
Without a mind, all we see is chaos.
Our sense immersed in a flood with
no order. There are no friends, no
humanity. Just noise.
EXT. WEST VILLAGE PIER -- EVENING
Kyle tells Lechner about the Mentor System. Lechner says
that they must take it to the world. He will arrange a meeting
with a reporter from the Wall Street Journal.
A few ASIAN FISHERMEN chat idly, watching their lines. Alone,
unchanged, Lechner walks out to the end of the wooden pier
where Kyle waits.
LECHNER
How's it goin, Kyle?
KYLE
You miss Dad often?
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LECHNER
Sure. No one seems to be able to
shell out the abuse like he could.
By comparison, my editor's a pussy.
INT. KYLE'S APARTMENT -- NIGHT
Kyle works to unlock the secret Dr. Bitterroot was witholding
from him.
INT. DOREEN'S OFFICE -- DAY
Kyle demands Doreen explain what happened with Quincy. She
tells Kyle that Hughes considers him a security risk.
INT. COGNATIVE COMPUTING LAB -- DAY
Kyle sits with his feet up on the desk, snoozing. A loud
knock jolts him awake.
KYLE
Come in!
Stern and Huges enter, ready to deal, with zero patience.
STERN
How did I know you'd be here?
KYLE
Good question.
STERN
Forget it. What have you got for me?
KYLE
What do you mean?
STERN
Kyle! Wake up! You are an employee
of Nebulous Corporation. I own
everything you do, think, or make. I
own your shit! Don't hold out on me!
KYLE
I'm not-
Hughes puts Kyle in a hammerlock.
STERN
You've been witholding this discovery
on Neural Resonance. I know it.
Eyes buldging, Kyle doesn't reply.
STERN (CONT'D)
I've come to take what belongs to
me.
He speed-dials his cell phone and says something equally
rapid. Gasping, Kyle watches Stern pace back and forth in
the cramped laboratory. A moment later, Doreen, wearing her
casual, black attire, enters. She goes directly to a computer
and begins work copying software.
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Kyle gags her name. She ignores him.
STERN (CONT'D)
You don't seem to understand the
nature of our contract, Kyle. There
is no such thing as private research
or academics. Everything is funded
by, made for, and to the benefit of
Nebulous. And only we have the power
to terminate that contract.
Stern gestures to Hughes. They wrestle Kyle down on the desk,
scattering papers and tiny components. Stern takes a
rudamentary Mentor Connector and attaches it to Kyle's temple.
Panicked, Kyle struggles, and almost breaks free, except
Stern lays him out with a bonejarring punch. They restrain
his arms. Dizzy, he understands when he hears:
DOREEN
What are you going to do?
They release Kyle. He almost manages to remove the Mentor
Connector, before... ZAP!!!
The universe goes white.
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